by cptgreg
Your story reminded me of the movie Ghost but as a porno. I like the idea behind it and its kind of sweet how the mom has a baby in the end. Will you continue it?
...make sure you use the correct tenses when writing. Use your spell check and the grammar check before submitting. Both are available with MS Word.
This story has been reviewed in the New Story Reviews on the Author's Hangout of the Lit Forums.Please visit there to read what I thought.
Very good. I see Sir hugs reviewed this story - good for him. I too got a chance to read it and I'll put in my 2 cents on the review board too. I did enjoy this story, great job. ~ Red
Bobbie Joe used a technique her father used to use when they were making love. Bobby Joe was not born when her father died. How could Bobby know the technique her father uses?
I liked it. Very good. Don't read the bad reviews or thing. Half the people on here don't know shit about telling a good story. Hell, I suck sometimes.
L.A.Wicker
Bobby Joe has a erotic dream bordering on the supernatural. Her mother has her own issues. Together they merge the past with the present. Disturbing but well written. Interesting!
DON'T KNOW HOW YOU CAME UP WITH THIS ONE, AND WHILE I DON'T SEE IT AS A SERIES, IT'S A GREAT ONE-TIMER