All Comments on 'Lost Heart'

There were a couple of little typos but not enough to detract from what was a very hot and sexy story. The tension between the three characters is there in the series and you've totally built on that. I liked the little observations like the way Sawyer always calls Kate 'Freckles' to wind her up. I could just hear him then.

This got me really hot.

You made the effort to put the story and buildup in and it was a good hot story. Nice one

That was excellent! More please! I bet there's lots more sexy funy that the three of them could have on the island....when's part 2 coming?

great story! love it from beginning to end!