All Comments on 'Little Girl Lost'

Without a doubt, this is the best lesbian story I've ever seen here.

Excellent story told in a believable manner. The first seduction scene where each searched the others body for ticks was very erotic. Keep up the good writing, you are a wonderful writer.

I can only vote 5 points for you on-line but I'll throw in another 995 points unofficially to make an even 1000.This was a really great story. Thank You for Your Work. TomJ.

Lisa has a wonderful style...it makes this site worth it! More Please.

I must admit, It's very lovely and touching

A fantastic story. It had great elements of horror, sex, love and angst. Wonderful. I enjoyed it very much.

lavliq

This awondefrul fancy and should be enjoyed by all reader, and paricularly sci-fi fans

This story is most definately a six in my book. Great story, I can't wait to hear more.

... The best story I have read. The best out of all categories. Simply amazing. Keep up the good work!

LISA SUMMERS u are truely gifted and omg i got goose bumps reading this story i read it to my best friend and she felt soooo wet and so did i we read and read and we think this is a great story and if there is a paranormal searcher on here i think this story will give them alot to think about oh so thank you for yet another incredible story

Thanks to Lisa for this,if there was only more love in the world

a good unique story, but way too long.

No, this story wasn't too long. If anything, it could have done with a little more text to build up the suspense. That said, it was an enjoyable weird tale. This is the first story of yours I have read---I'm looking forward to trying the next one.

You can actually see the school on Google Maps. Rather creepy looking...

You are right at the top of my Favorite writers.

Well done!

The erotica in this was fine, but to be honest, the story was so good it could have been almost dropped. The story its self is absolutely great.

Well written & composed. I wish this story line was expanded into a full book (it could be easily done ( with the love, but for more commercial success, without the hardcore). Any combination of FF/MF/MM/FM could work.

By far the best actual story with a plot I've ever read on here.

(Just the ending was great, but too sudden)

Thx

Great job on this story, I really loved reading it. Thank you for sharing it with us!

the tick inspection-blistering!! as was their going down on each other...

never read/heard the mini-pussy/navel simile made before-loved it!

and Kes's extra-thorough check of Kendall's rump...

And you made their inspection of the school VERY creepy/palpable

as was your description of the town...actually did a job on a ranch outside Falfurrias some years back...

Five, and fave.

A wonderful fantastic tale ...... Yes love can conquer deep tales and climb up hills ...... Truly lovely beautiful story ...... Awesome telltale style . 10 stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thank you for this story 10 stars

Tony NZ

A wonderful story Thank you so much.

Tony NZ

Much applause for moving from trivial non-stories with great sex to a real story with great sex.

Your sex is excellent. Keep climbing WRT greater stories.

PS: I am reading all your works in publication order, so I'm hoping the above is moot.