All Comments on 'Lick or Eat'

Wow what a hot start to a potential series of stories about these young girls exploits. More please!

This was a fantastic story. Keep writing more.

You might want to use a little more care in your editing. The plural "s" was left out occasionally (e.g. breasts), and there are many other little errors that detract from the overall reading experience.

My name is Beatrice and I found your story to be totally arousing. Although tricked at the beginning, the young girls lost their inhibitions and considered themselves well "treated" at the end, so much so that I felt envious. My concern is how I would feel the day after and the day after that.

The story is well set-up for a number of sequels. I am getting soaking wet again just thinking about all the possibilities!!

Wonderful story, very arousing. Would love to see more from you.

slut writter. she is reealy a whore for black cock. I gave you a big old zero baby! A big old hole like the one you have between your legs.

When Amber said to Susan, "Let yourself go and chill out, be daring and adventurous," little did she know just how adventurous their little foray would turn out to be. I had a constant hardon picturing these young girls and women having it "any way they liked it." --John

Enjoyed reading your story. Very HOT! Am waiting for more baby...

Very hot idea, but your dialog was silly and didn't sound like a person would actually talk, I understand that in the throughs of passion, people's language gets looser, but it builds to that point, if you start out with dumb loose dialog, it gives your story a less erotic feel. But the idea made up for most of the errors I saw! Good job!

it was ok very interesting

Why are the sexual writings for male amusement so vapid and stupid? It seems the stupider the writing, the more men think this crap is hot. Such a shame. Good lesbian erotica for women sure is hard to find.

good story as with all of yours are hope to see a 2nd paet to this and see if the mums and sisters end up in it at some point in the future

I am so fucking wet now. More please!

I like how the title is reminiscent of "trick or treat"