All Comments on 'Let the Programming Begin'

This was one of the best stories I have read in a long time. I only hope you have a followup to this and will include the sales girl also. I am anxious to find out how her hypnosis goes. Keep up the good work.

Incredible story you touched on so many "possibilities for Cathy's future adventures. Please continue! Great piece of writing, everything flowed so smoothly and made perfect sense!

How much of this is real? *G*

A great start to a story that could take all year to finish. Please keep up the good work.

Great story! Your story has an incredable flow from hot to hotter! Best story I have read!!! I hope you plan on continuing this erotic tale. Your the man Dave...lol

WHEN A STORY CAN BE BOTH ERROTIC AND FUN WITH ALL THE CHARACTORS CONCENTING, YOU HAVE THE MAKINGS OF A CLASSIC. I DO HOPE IT CONTINUES.

That was a great story and I really enjoyed the fact that it was both interesting and sensual.

That waas wonderful. I could place myself there doin that with my wife and it was so wonderful. You did a great job in the writing and the content. Bravo!

this is the most enjoyable storY i have read in a long time .please keep it going .your style is great and easy to read and get involved in.please please please keep it going!!!!!!

Oh wow , that was such a hot story , it got me all hot too .

thanks emma .

That was a low act to pull. each paragraph propelled you forward wanting more, even desiring more. Then you pull the rug out from under us. Please don't end it there.

I only got 7 words for it.

It got me wet, hot, horny!

I am really into hypnotism myself and have many fantasies. This is now one of them. Keep it going. Have him Take Susan and Penny and Bills really hot wife. It would be interesting to see him perfect his hypnotic skills to the point where he could hypnotise people over the phone.

Thanks,

5' 8" with a Big Irish Cock

Excellent piece of work...Can't wait to hear more.

great story hope there is more to come cant wait to find out what happens when she has her massage and to see what hubby gets her to do next keep up the great work

More Plese!

That was amazing! The best part was its uniqueness, along with the GREAT writing. Please, PLEASE don't stop here, that would be pure torture!

I've been a Literotica reader for years and this is ABSOLUTELY the best story I've ever read. I read this one and chapter 5. You gotta keep 'em coming and not leave us hanging!

This story is great. You have a knack for storytelling, and this is fresh and original and the ideas are terrific. But what happened? Did you rush it out before it was ready? Some of the edits required are even underlined, dude. I think it's excellent when I've finished a story, and it's tempting to send it in before it's ready. I'm hoping Chapter 2 is edited and the corrections have been made, or I'll be taking out a correction on my 5 ;-)

Even after I "finished" your story, I read the rest of it. Great writing, and I loved the introduction of all those toys - I want to try some of them for myself now! Also loved that it's husband/wife, makes me feel sexy to imagine my own husband thinking of me this way!!

Loved the story agree with all the comments on how hot, real and well written. Write more!

What a story teller. This is a real hot one. Keep them coming. No pun intended.

Encore, Encore....hot story

WOW I loved this... i know it was not strictly BDSM BUT i loved the mind control mixed with lust, love and tenderness!!!!! Please keep writing about their adventures!

Please write more, A very good story

It was a fine story, but you just HAD to use "shuttered" when you meant "shuddered". They're two entirely different words...

Very nice story - I loved the building fun, and must go find a book on hypnosis to try on my wife!

I just found this story and thoroughly enjoyed it. I loved how it begins with Cathy hinting and then urging her husband to get the book on hypnosis. It was really hot as they mutually work together to expand Cathy's sexual repertoire. I loved how you opened up future sexual opportunities with the people they meet and their friends. Great story, Joe

two words: fuckin hot

Love the story premise and would love to try on my wife!

"That was kind of a bummer because one of my fantasies was to share her with another man"

-Lost all respect for this guy after reading this.

And to have the wife be the one to suggest adding in a hot female partner (and not even get immediately excited by it)... This guy's batting for the other team =/

I agree with the previous commenter. The sentence about dreaming to share the wife with another man made a sour taste in my mouth. Can't think of anything more gross than that.

I don't even know in what direction this story is heading and I am already wishing I was Cathy. Hypnotic stories are my weakness.

I look forward to finishing the tale.

Wow! Lots of normal details keep this real, but the 'fantasy' of being hyonotised to become aroused and orgasm on command is panty-wetting and exciting! Great tale. May revisit this!!

Great story, intrigued all the way through so far. Expecting good things to follow. Keep this story going. I can imagine many facets of excitement coming up.