All Comments on 'Learning From Tammy Ch. 01'

Interesting beginning.

Boyd

This was an awesome story. I only wish more women were open to things like this and took the lead...

Keep writing, you do it very well

Wonderfully written. You do a fine job of cramming a load of experiences and emotions into a short story. Love the characterizations and the scening.

No rating -- nice story, but like a lot of other posters, you need an editor. There are a lot of glitches that could be smoothed out to make this an easy read. With the glitches, I'm jarred every few lines.