All Comments on 'Laundry Tales 01: Twins' Charade'

That was a *cough* very interesting *moan* portrayal of St. George and the dragon, Jeanne. Stimulating drama. *wink*

Good luck.

I love the ghost telling ghost stories... how fun! :)

Most little boys have a Nanny to love and care for them. With the twins they have Martha, a ghost nanny. So when the twins start getting older, Martha joins them in erotic Halloween activities. Fun Read!

delightfully different and told with the confidence of a master storyteller. Thanks for submitting this!

There's an old couplet about a knight boinking a maiden and St. George and his spear in the dragons mouth but it slips my mind. This reminds me of that, but I digress. Great story. Pleasantly erotic. Good luck in the contest.

I liked the idea of being put into the story, and being told by a ghost. All unique, and quite a bit of heat as well. Good luck in the contest!

And a squirm-inducing climax.

Loved the last line, as well. :)

liked the idea with the ghost telling the story that is retold in the story...

I am turning into a laundry tale addict here... very well done.