All Comments on 'Laresa's World Ch. 19: Seymour'

Goes unpunished.

The poor bastard.

Nice work.

Isn't that just the way it goes for the smart people of the world? You have evoked sympathy for both characters in a simple, but richly hued chapter. Looking forward to the future installments. Very well done! *winks*

Script

but I love the way you continued on with it and the fact that now someone is looking for a way to free here.

....he did nothing really wrong, but he is imprisoned. He can't be free, but he seeks freedom for her. Very sad. Very tragic, but definitely gripping. Perhaps he is seeking his freedom vicariously through her, on some level.

Little does Laresa know that she had a hand in making the Society of Djinn what it is "today". Love the birth of the Society's headquarters =) The first rule is the hardest for every member of the Society to keep, with your heart's desire but a wish away. Excellent tale!

This is a great new addition, even if the ending is sad. I love the way you brought the Society in. And I can't wait to read the next chapter. What's going to happen?!

Thanks for a lovely story.

Black Tulip

I am thrilled with this chapter and how you have involved the society and how their offices were formed, great idea. You have a great imagination and I'm honored to be writing with you. ~ Red

I don't think it matters really but it's copyright not copywrite!

if through her promises and seduction, she was setting up this trap for him.