All Comments on 'Katie'

This was a short and seemingly simple story. Yet when you look more closely, there is so much more buried within. It leaves you asking lots of questions. No doubt this was the writer's intention. Excellent tale.

Katie takes a once a year stroll down her old street. As she visits from whatever world she now lives in she is filled with memories. I presume the ending was for effect.

Until next halloween, Katie deserves better than it is going to get, but I gave you the high mark because it kept my interest, and left me with an image in mind - something many stories do not.

Thank you and good luck.

describes the end of this story. It was more sad than horrific, but that's what you were going for, I know.

Good luck in the contest.