All Comments on 'Karna'

You've got hot competition in the "Most Erotic Performance by a Dragon" category. ;)

This is a great story - not just good sex but fine character development in the leads and wonderful humor and voice in the dragon. A pleasure as always.

only wished it were longer

otherwise great story

~James Flowers

just a wonderful read.

With few words the authour does such a good job of building up the characters and the background.

A lovely, romantic and quite hot little fantasy.

Well done.

Colleen, that is one of the best stories I've read on here for absolutely ages. (I know I'm biased and I love fantasy fiction above just about anything else... even Vampires *grin*) It made me laugh and it made me cry (especially when Gwyneth went home to say goodbye) and it made me hot. (I could even ignore the few tiny typoes!! *kiss*)

Wonderful!! Thank you!!

xx Sadie

I was wondering just how they would "do the deed" - wonderful charaterization of the dragon, and the gift towards the end was unexpected. Very, very nice!

fails to leave a wonderful impression. Beautiful word and ideals with good triumphing over evil. A gorgeous story.

You did not get the top vote only due to it's shortness!

Now I have heard everything-- but I suppose not even in this day and age. "Dragonheart" is one of my favorite movies. Well it is going to have to scrunch over a little to make room for this story.

Well written and well told, as I usually expect from you. Definatly belongs in a fairytale book somewhere. Thanks for sharing it with us.

JimDinMN

But surprisingly I really enjoyed it. Very well written and entertaining.

The premise was not a new one, the lesbian twist was. :) A tale well told, indeed and one I'll be listing as a favorite for more than the obvious reason.

Dranoel

The "other" Dragon. ;)

"Dranoel beware ...

04/15/06 by BlackShanglan

You've got hot competition in the "Most Erotic Performance by a Dragon" category. ;)"

Perhaps I should post Chapter 13 of "A Tale of Two Spirits" just to catch up. :D

This was just great the beggining reminds me of a story I read a long time ago called Dragon's Bane I believe..made me love this one even more.

Absolutly Amazing... you never cease to Amaze me! What a cool story!

that compare to you Ms. Colleen. I find your stories are substantial and never seem to be lacking of any of the things that make stories great. It's a wonderful gift to have and something that you should be thanked for sharing its preciousness with us. You are indeed a wonder.

What an imagination! I absolutely loved the character development and the story!

The only suggestion I have is to check a few places where the spelling or tense is not correct. Otherwise.. excellent job!!!

Such a well written story, I loved it!

Thank you for the beauty of your work.

Wonderful!! I absolutely loved it. I was captured by your wonderful writing and dialogue and believable storytelling.

I hated to see it end. The story caught my imagination immediately and it seemed I could not read fast enough. Few published authors can accomplish this.

This was absolutely beautiful. I definitely liked the surprise of finding that the dragon was female I was expecting another dragon taking advantage of the maiden story and here you turned it into a loving sensual lesbian tale.

that was a sweet tale loved it a lot :)

Very sweet.... liked the ending .....

I enjoy reading, everything that I can get my hands on, that keeps me interested. This story did more. It made me think, and dream, and fantasize, and not even always about sex. She is an amazing author.

i love this story but was ct's last

always 5* beyond

That's gotta be one of the best descriptive lines I've ever read. I have no idea why, but it is.

brilliant in every way

thank you

Thank you; a very well-told tale.

You also have a real feeling for a Dragon.

73

HP

"I must admit, I'm a little taken aback by actual conversation."

A+++ dialogue, Ms. Thomas. May Cthulhu bless your wonderful, wonderful soul.

Only problem is that now I should write the corollary story, about how people can be Dragons, maiden eaters and city fryers, instead of 'just people'. And I do not have the skill to for that ;-()

love Villow

But of course when Colleen writes of dragons, how could I not like it?

Dran.

Very enjoyable characters were very likable and well written my only complaint is that the dragon turned human it’s just something that bothers me as a huge dragon lover. You should definitely write more stories of dragons you have a lot of talent but you should leave out the shifting in my humble opinion.

Just when I've found an author that can write great stories, I find that she's not writing them anymore. Guess I'll just have to settle for reading the ones that are posted and be thankful for what is posted. This story was both charming and surprising. I was like Gwyneth, how to make love to a dragon? But in the end it all worked out, good story.

Coleen, thank you. The dragon transforming, and the final words from Gwyneth. Beautiful story. ☺ Would have loved to have Karna give some karma to the men in Gwyneth's village, though. 😉

What a precious gift and if it used wisely it will stay forever ….. it needs some ingredients Loving kindness, compassion, mindfulness, tenderness, peacefulness, tenderness and some more, but that will help bloom this magic flower 🌸

An marvelous tale 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨☘️