All Comments on 'Just What He Wanted'

I know I should have behaved better this year. That was a nice story.

"Sounds great but I'll need a shower first" said Helen before kissing James again and departing for the bathroom."

After that load he just put in her, she will need a "summer's Eve" to wash that cum out so she doesn't leak all over the chair at the restuatant....

and good luck to you!

Good luck in the contest! ~Imp

Gee a true LOVINGwife story liked it

Very nice story. A nice depature from the usual fare in the 'Loving wives' category.

Lovely addition to the contest.

Always, E

Nice job. Good luck in the contest!

v~

Don't know if this is a Loving Wife story or a Romance myself!

Just the thing to start out your day on the right note IMO.

Thanks!

For me the story lacked credibility as I spent the whole story wondering how she got wrapped up in the box. ( . . all wrapped up with a bow on top.)

It can only have been her secret lover who screwed her before she got in the box, and watched them having sex after she got out.

the only advice I would offer is a few more commas were needed in places. Otherwise it was a sweet little holiday tale :)

Good luck

Ali

Nice story.. good luck

Well written and lovingly told. Thank You. Ronnie W.

the best gift is the gift of love...and sex too <grin> nice tale...

Merry Christmas and Good Luck! (~_~)

Sweet! Who says being married is boring? :) Good luck to you!

Yea, but was his wife beautiful?

I have enjoyed all your stories.

Are there more to cum.

Please let me know.

Thanks

Al

chief40al@yahoo.com

I never thought of having myself boxed, wrapped and bowtied but hey, sounds like an idea. Good luck in the contest.

some people are just so hard to buy for!!

Fun story.

Great story!

(Hey, she could have gotten a box with a top and just put the lid on the box, with the the bow on top...)

Very nice story, but whats with the flavored condum. Most women like the flavor of a good bare stiff cock. I guess thats called a sanitry blow job. My wife like the feel and taste of a good cock, although she spits the cum in a kleenex.

Loved it!!

But why did she need a flavored condom?

Author does good holiday stories.

Helen is great.

Well described, but to me there was no plot, no story, it was getting going and just stopped.

Sorry but it jumped out of gear very near the front, .

love story