by AlwaysBeTrue
Such a lovely story. Warm and tender and just darn near perfect for the type of story that it is. I will look for your work again and again.
wonderful, sweet, sappy, funny, erotic, sensational...I could go on until I ran out of words. Fantastic job and a wonderful read. You formed a true sense of romance with your words.
A very nice little piece of work.
The authour accomplished a great deal in a very short time.
Well done.
Well written and the added humor just made it better. Best of all was the fact that a woman who considered herself to be "large" was the heroine. Thank You. Ronnie W.
There is only one thing about this story that I don't believe... much too well done for me to believe it's your first!!! Beautiful job.. but you are NOT taking last place away from me!!!
Good job, ABT! I loved the sexual tension between the two characters, as well as the fact that Clare wasn't stick-thin. My only problem was that the ending seemed a bit rushed, but other than that it was a fun read. Good luck to you.
sweet story, well told, building to the climactic moment. They soud like a very happy couple, one that deserves each other. Nick, like almost all straight men, believes that real women have curves.
I liked the way the characters teased each other in the beginning, leading up to a delighful end. A very good first story. Hope to see many more from you. :)
Great writting made the wonderful story come alive. Well done.
Great writting made the wonderful story come alive. Well done.
If this is really and truly, scouts honor, cross your heart and hope to die, your first story, no telling how good you'll be after getting a little experience.
Rumple
Very well said, its not the journey...it is the destination. How, beautiful and romantic. - Pete
A great story. Too bad there is no more. Thanks for your time and imagination.