All Comments on 'Joanne's Metamorphosis'

The set-up and story presentation makes you really believe this guy could have everything except what he needs to be complete. Very nice.

This is a good one. Recommended highly!

I'll leave it at that :)

What a great read. Loved it.

I often take the time to cast my ballot for each story, but this story rates a better than best. Great story line that is well written and sensitive to the characters. Hope to see many more from this author. Many Thanks!

This was an unusually, at least for Literotica, wonderful love story. I think I have read all of your previous entries and I have enjoyed them very much. But, this one exceeded all the others. Thank you for a magnificent contribution.

The plot line was in keeping with the sorty's excitement. So well done and the technology of flying interspersed made the story REAL.

Well done as usual

This is far and away the best story I have read on this site, or anywhere else for that matter--kudos to you--

OUTSTANDING!!!

this is such a sweet story, not only about sex, but about a real transformation, the type all women wish to have

thank you for sharing this story with us

nati

I have not read anything here that could match the content of this story. Thank you for sharing this. It has been such a wonderful gift.

The frequency of sex does not make up for a lack of detail. That chick likes absolutely everything, and "And that was ok too" gets repetitive after a while. Also, learn the difference between "there" and "their" and don't make every friggin' greeting "It's been too goddamn long!"

Another SUPER story by you.

Boyd

Classic theme, predictable, but a great read. Well done.

They don't get much better

a very great tale

very well written keep it up

You weave some very excellent tales. This one tops all that I have read.

Question? Does anyone say 'Damm' or 'Hell' any more or is it always 'Fuck'?

A Dismore classic. Almost flawless and a great story line. <p> <p> <p>

Some aviation technical flaws. "climb to 150 thousand" is a bit too high for a Citation. Should be "15 thousand". And "turn left to 185" should be "left heading 185". ATC refrains from using the word "to" right before numbers because it could be assumed to be the number "two". Finally on the approach to land you used airspeed in "miles per hour"; should have been "knots". Still a great read.

too predictable

his character is unrealistic as is hers

and whats with the constant peeing?

It seems that each story of yours that I read is better than the one before it. You have a way with character development that enables the reader to really feel what you are trying to do. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and hope you will continue to write this type of story. Thanks for your efforts.

seems like the first page of this is missing

again another hit.

I guess I'd like the woman to not be as well-used and experienced in "all-holes-go" - there should be something left for her to give to her one-and-only man.

This girl comes across as not too picky and maybe even a little too "fast" - no problem fingering herself in front of a man she has known for only a few hours - and a co-worker at that.

She sounds like a little less than a "prize" to me.

As the story developes, her character gains a little, though.

Yet another of your stories that I enjoyed very much. I've read several other stories in the mean time and really enjoy the variety of plots and characters. I noticed that you also have good variety in your descriptions of their sexual relations. This is not the case with some otherwise excellent authors. One in particular repeatedly mentions how "oral" he is. That's fine, but in every story? Thanks again! [Gualterio]

Great characters, great story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

More?

Enjoyable start to finish as always!

how could he have ever lost a job?

I love a good story about nice people, but this guy was so over the top it was too much of a good thing.

Wonderful story, your characters seem to come alive. Well Done!!