All Comments on 'Jessica - The Making of a Cockslut'

A hot woman getting shagged by a big dick. What could be better. Want to know what happens next.

awesomely sexy story- but angelina jolie isnt right for it, im thinking more along the lines of shannon elizibeth or jessica alba

A very hot explanation as to how Jessica's BIG dick adventures came about.

I'm still grinning over the ending lines. Reminds me of someone I know. *smile*

In answer to your questioon (italics..1st paragraph)

Pee Wees, actually. Less danger of getting an inferiority complex.

One of the most talented writers on this site, you continue to amaze us with your work. Jessica is the ideal female character and keeps us coming back for more time and time again.

an extremly well written piece. Good job.

WOW man...ummmm tats like a sexual-fantasy lived to its extreeeeeme!!!U literally made my juices flow.Lukng forward to more work of urs babe.

I really enjoyed it, not everything in it was a turn on to me, but many parts of it were. It was well written, and hot!

I know it is fantasy but a virgin is not likely to orgasm especially not that may times and she would be worried about getting pregnant too! So it was obviously a story for males because they dont care about these things!!!

great, but i think u should try to get keria knightly, that would be awesome

Dear god that story was so hot. You should try and fill the role with Jessica Simpson or someone like that. I really loved the ending.

im a woman and i thought it was fanastic albeit completely unrealistic. keep em coming so i can keep coming.

This story is soo hot!! I always come back and read this story and It always gets me wet..

This is my favorite story out of the whole site and favourite one from you... I noticed its also your latest one..

Please write more stories for your readers.. the story was sooo good and soo erotic.. definitely my favourite..

this story is HOT.

i'm still shaking from the orgasam it gave me.

I like how she is shy and nervous, but the guy is just to bold and it makes it unrealistic. The sex was well written, and as for the movie, who better to play Jessica than Jessica Simpson?!?!?

And besides i'm not a huge fan of angelina jolie, if she needed to be a dark haired girl then i think i would vote for.... hmmm i might have to come back to you on that. Lucy lui, or Jenna Haze maybe.

This is bar none the hottest story on Literotica. I must have more like this!

Your writing was pretty good, but the story was extremely unrealistic.

who gives a shit if its unrealistic its fucking amazing i loved it great job keep em comming

I don't care whether it's fiction and fantasy. It's almost like my first time. Take me back there. Don't let him be so gentle next time.

Ok this was just an awesome story; well written and really hot. And to the person who said its not realistic, who cares, that's what makes it a fantasy.

I absolutely loved the story. It reminded me of my first cock which was big and black. Keep writing please!

one of the best things ive ever read and i am a comp lit major