by Rumple Foreskin
This is sexy and I love the theme--beauty is more than just skin deep. Great job, good luck!
Very hot piece, Rumple. It was an interesting plotline, the whole self-esteem/beauty issue. Everyone needs love, even if they're not "perfect." Good luck.
...Is like the weather here in Nevada at this time of year. Damned hot!! Good job, and good luck amigo...
But since it was sex from go to stop - I gave you the five bomb.
I think changes made since the review piece help the flow (in more ways than one!). Good work Rumple.
Hope it was more than just chance, but it was so appropriate that Donna's 'imperfections' were less dramatic than the men's.
Erotic tale with a serious subject. Yous not lost your touch. Bravo.
a comment on this one, rumpley. Very hot and wonderful with non stop sex...wonderful job. Good luck in the contest.
A stretch to fit it into the contest theme, but nobody is going to deny the writing or sexual content in this story.
starts off with a bang... I meant Blow job <grin and the trail of words that followed had be tied to your story till she took her clothes off at the end and ...
Let's get back to celebrating Nude Day."
THANKS FOR THE EROTIC READ ...(~_~)
good luck and happy nude day Rump~
loved the story. Characters were great, believable, sexy and very human!
I'm no writer, but I like to put ideas into print. What I've read here is truly Good Authoring. I think it is great. Well done.