All Comments on 'It's Ability That Counts'

by Rumple Foreskin

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impressiveimpressivealmost 18 years ago
Nice work, Rumps!

~ Imp

SexSweetheartSexSweetheartalmost 18 years ago
Sexy

That was wonderful and hot. Got me bothered.

Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Sexy

This is sexy and I love the theme--beauty is more than just skin deep. Great job, good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Well done

Well done!

Aurora BlackAurora Blackalmost 18 years ago
Holy Shit!

Very hot piece, Rumple. It was an interesting plotline, the whole self-esteem/beauty issue. Everyone needs love, even if they're not "perfect." Good luck.

drksideofthemoondrksideofthemoonalmost 18 years ago
Your Story...

...Is like the weather here in Nevada at this time of year. Damned hot!! Good job, and good luck amigo...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Not my cup of tea

But since it was sex from go to stop - I gave you the five bomb.

neonlyteneonlytealmost 18 years ago
Hot

I think changes made since the review piece help the flow (in more ways than one!). Good work Rumple.

elfin_odalisqueelfin_odalisquealmost 18 years ago
Title says it all.

Hope it was more than just chance, but it was so appropriate that Donna's 'imperfections' were less dramatic than the men's.

Erotic tale with a serious subject. Yous not lost your touch. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Just had to leave

a comment on this one, rumpley. Very hot and wonderful with non stop sex...wonderful job. Good luck in the contest.

kbatekbatealmost 18 years ago
Rumple gives great sex

A stretch to fit it into the contest theme, but nobody is going to deny the writing or sexual content in this story.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
excellent tale

starts off with a bang... I meant Blow job <grin and the trail of words that followed had be tied to your story till she took her clothes off at the end and ...

Let's get back to celebrating Nude Day."

THANKS FOR THE EROTIC READ ...(~_~)

good luck and happy nude day Rump~

MayhemLassMayhemLassalmost 18 years ago
quirky, fun and it really realy works

loved the story. Characters were great, believable, sexy and very human!

sirhugssirhugsalmost 18 years ago
Hot yet tender

though not a core Nude Day theme.

sacksackalmost 18 years ago
very steamy......

kept my interest, I hope you place with this one!

CespenarCespenarover 16 years ago

I'm no writer, but I like to put ideas into print. What I've read here is truly Good Authoring. I think it is great. Well done.

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