All Comments on 'It Waits'

That was creepy...excellent job!!!

Sam.

Very nicely done. Fast. It makes you want to read it through in one breath, or hold your breath, maybe.

A little gross beyond my tastes, but certainly original.

One of the best opening lines I've read in some time and you do a fine job of referring back to it at the ending. Congratulations on a fine piece of writing from someone who doesn't care for the subject or genre.

Rumple

Not really erotic, unless you're into that sort of thing, but scary, like a Halloween story should be.

Kind of gruesome but over all well written. :)

Loved that moment. Very well written and a difficult subject handled incredibly well. Actually scary. Great work. esl

I loved it.

A very horrifying piece of work; swift, dark, gruesome and unnerving.

Well done!

alone when I read this and had to walk through the house to check the locks on the doors. Thanks for giving me the creeps. It's what Halloween is about, being scared which in and of itself is an aphrodisiac. Very nicely done.

Great plot, no happy fluff. Really liked the way it was left open, just 'cos the story was over, doesn't mean the horror was. Fine job!

*shudder* Horrific descriptions. The ripping of the labia...ouch, that makes me cringe. Great story.

*shudder* ~Imp

Short, scary, and to the point! Great halloween story!

I can't say that "loved it" is really the right comment, but that it has power is undeniable. A harrowing, brutal read that is deeply frightening and that speaks volumes for the author's power.

Ok that was just downright creepy. **shiver** Good luck!

This was an ugly read. Not ugly in a bad sense, but ugly in the brutality and horror displayed. Nothing subtle here, no attempt to mask it in Hitchcockesque suspense. It's more scary for the starkness.

Good luck!

yup it was

I always knew you had a dark side

Richard

I'm still shivering; this story was truly creepy. Good luck!

and hot damn, I will!!! this was a good tale ~ Scary...very scary -

That was intense! About the only negative thing I have to say is the change between past and present tense at times, but other than that....the story was totally creepy and horrifying. I think it belongs in Erotic Horror! Oh yeah, and I liked that she didn't die, but now has to bear a demon child, interesting ending. Nice Halloween entry :) Good luck with the contest.

it plays well off of the aspects of horrific unknowns and is brutal, quick and vicious.

for myself it forces one to accept darker aspects without the romanticizing of the horror.

...fanrific...*shaking self all over* Definatly NOT what I was expecting...but in a good way! :D

As soon as I read something about a labia being torn, I got kind of sick.