All Comments on 'Intimate Waters'

yes you are!

good luck with the contest, minxie

Wow Minx!

This should be compulsory for everybody to read! It's simply awesome!!!

Nicely paced and well written story - erotic enough to keep the interest of even the most critical readers.

Wow! That was almost too erotic to be a How To. It was also wonderfully detailed and thorough on the subject apart from being incredibly hot. Well done.

And now I want to grab a guy and try out every one of your suggestions!

I enjoyed your essay, thanks for the read and good luck (~_~)

This is a great read with lots of good ideas. I've shared a bath or shower with my love a few times, but I think it's time for another now!

Great sense of occassion Minx. Washing a partner is a fantastic experience, I love washing a partners hair, the intimacy of 'grooming' is too little explored in erotica.

Well done! Showering together is an oft-had fantasy but tends to succumb to reality very quickly, mostly because...well...it ain't easy!

Now it is, thanks to you!

Well done!

Good luck in the contest!

what a wonderful, wonderful essay! I want to try that right now .... thank you for the wonderful suggestions on how to explore, how to increase intimacy! wonderful.

and well-written and true, too. I have showered with girl friends and it has always been extremely erotic. I have had characters in stories shower together too but I have never described it in that much detail.

Its not new though. I did like your writing style though.

and I have no one here I can do that with...

This is a great how-to! It is inspiration for lots of fun. Good luck in the contest! You did a great job!

Of why a shower or bath can be so much fun, and so comforting for a couple. I loved how you approached this, with wit and calm expertise, more teaching than tantalizing, but it didn't come off like a book of instructions.

A lot of people forget how enticing and seductive water in any form can be. Thank you for reminding us!

Nice job, minx! ~Imp

Loved the details will definitely try soon.. Beautifully written.. Thanks look forward to more

This was a great idea--original, fun and sexy, too! Only one problem: "Start with a water temperature suited to both parties. Too cold or too hot for either one can be distracting, to say the least." We can NEVER decide on the "right" shower temperature... it's always too hot for me and too cold for him! Maybe we should invest in dual showerheads? Great how-to-Minx, loved it... !

Richly detailed and bubbly fun to read. Thanks for taking the time to display your talent with this work. Good luck in the contest. ~Red

All of the suggestions sound so lovely. The problem was always me. Ok, I do have to say she had a part in it. When I felt my hands on my ladies body soap or no, within 5 minutes it was always a footrace to the bedroom, sometimes without the benefit of towels. Thank God for a plastic undersheet. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Very sensual stuff, Minx.

Hot & bothered adults + hot water = Sexual explosion.

That's an equation we can all live with, I think. Good luck in the contest.

Glad to see you writing again! This was an elegent piece and it has given a new meaning to showering. I will be using the information to enhance my lovemaking with my wife. I'd love to see a piece on the bathtub. I would be interested in any suggestions on enhancing that area. Also, if you have any how to's in the bedroom. You mentioned massage, etc.

Your piece was so informative, I'd love to read anything you have to say.

Please keep writing! I've missed your stories very much.

L

Sensually thought out guide for enhancing intimacy. Thank you

Hugo