by Amy Sweet
The whole story was perfect from beginning to end (didn't think as much of the gang bang.....). I liked the way it played out, but am sad there isn't more - maybe to come? Keep it up.
You mean I'm the first to comment.....Not fair! (What's the problem folks-are you all a bunch of ADD addled people that can't enjoy having a long tale unfolded naturally and erotically? Shesh!!!) I'm barely halfway into, and into it I am....it is such a full, lush work....I love the blending of your protagonist's "inner dialogue", with extreemly realistic dialogue (the mother/daughter dialogue is insanely hilarious) all mixed together with incredibly erotic and beautifully written sex.... Wow!!!
Oh and the authoress happens to be beautiful herself!