All Comments on 'If You Miss Once, Try, Try Again'

somehow I don't think the transition would be quite this perfect or "easy". Perhaps this is just my issue, I just don't think there are that many women who would go from males to females so readily, EVEN IF the relationship with the male was abusive. Had you made the two women become friends or soulmates, I think that would have been more believable, albeit a less interesting submission! A little editing here would have enhanced the story as well...you need "there" rather than "here" at the beginning of one of the earlier paragraphs for example.

I dissagree with "sack". Some women ARE bisexual. And why not?!

I liked it, it was well-paced and held my interest. I know for a fact that there are women who are bisexual who can and will switch from a man to a woman (and back again! :) Love is love. I don't think the boyfriend even necessarily HAD to be abusive. But I appreciate your handling of the subject matter. Good luck!

... with the contest.

Always, E

i dont normally leave comments but admire your work theres actually love in it and not just sex. great job!

This is a wonderfull story. I really enjoyed reading it. I wish that you would write more than you have been as you are a very good writer.

I just finished this wonderfully written love story!😍 And I keep wondering why would want to tamper with happiness!!! 😑

I have read some good love stories on this site, but yours is one of the best ones yet, Terri was to good for Jamie's brother, and to have your BF treat you in that manner is very bad, when she lost her patience he should have been there to comfort her, but I guess it was Jamie to the rescue, I would love to read more of this I also liked your little comments as well I wish I could give you more than 5 stars

Absolutely wonderful!!! Beautifully written story.

I totally loved this story. Thank you for sharing it with us!