All Comments on 'Ice-Cold, Red-Hot'

by zenmackie

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Goosebumps!

Amazing story, the words were just right, and the content was wonderful! You've got a voice made for this, too! I only am a bit dissapointed the very last words were cut. 5/5!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Fantastic

This was fun and hot and sexy without being crude or absurd. I serious feat, really. I loved it and I loved the real spontaneity of it. Kudos!

sacksackover 17 years ago
a "stroke" of genius....

for one who is "bored stiff"!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Was wonderful..

Really enjoyed it, made me warm and tingly all in the right spots!

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