by Anonymous 101
Please send more. This was great. Reminds me of things I have done in the past.
A very nice story. The buildup/intro section was a little too long & labored, or I would have given it a perfect rating.
I like stories where a husband talks the wife into showing her goods and having strangers talk nasty about her. Next step is toget her to show herself while you enjoy watching men view her. Thnks for a good start.
very good story but are you sure she was asleep? I had my wives tits out in the car once and when we came to a city she decided to my suprise not to put them away and left them out for all to see.She later told me she thought i'd put them away and if i did'nt she would see how far i'd let it go
cant find the logon address for this site.
Please forward it to me
collins@ppickering.plus.com
This reads like a true story. Either your attention to detail in fantasy is intense or you are actually doing as you said and writing a journal of this exciting night for your future consumption. I suspect if that is the case, publishing it is a second chance to live the humiliation.
Because of the detail it is a little slow but the subtilty of the erotic story is intoxicating. I hope you write more.
The concept of a hubbie slowly plugging at his wife's clothes to expose her on a train is great. The wife formed a really had a sexy and elegant picture in my head.
However, the story was very full of the husband's thoughts. Those were very boring to read through. If the 'I worried about this', 'I couldn't believe', and 'I can't remember' were taking out, it would be more fun to read.
The lewd exposed wife is the turn on, not the rambling thoughts of the husband.
I loved the story. I would have enjoyed being there. I would probably have caught the whole thing on my camera with my zoom lens. How hot would that have been? I hope you share more of your adventures.
More than a few times I've exposed my sleeping wife. Her agreeing to let me do that, when she sleeps is part of why I married her. The first time was while we were dating. She was sleeping over when a friend came to borrow my tools. I took a brief break to pee and on my way stopped to check on her. My girlfriend was still asleep on top of half of the covers. Her face and side was buried and tangled in the covers. Her crotch was still wet and shiny and dripping from what we were doing before I got called and she went to sleep.
I was going to cover her up and close the door but then then did the opposite. I wasn't going to send him in or invite him to wash up. If he asked to use our can I'd let him and wait. He did. He took so long I assumed he dropped a duce. Once he was gone I went back to check on her. She was unmoved but had added wet spots on her exposed left butt check. My 'friend' had beat off onto her ass!
So since he had proved himself a bigger ass than myself I decided I had better tell her an edited version about what happened that night, incase he blabs or brags about it. She was shocked but didn't seem mad like I feared. She is pretty smart and her questions eventually cornered me into having to admit my part. She told me she forgave us both, claiming it happened before and admitting that the whole situation was a bit of a turn on.
Not then, but later, we talked more and developed an agreement. I could show her off all I wanted as long as she was unwitting and could pass as innocent of it if cops or drama showed up. Like I said, she is a keeper
Post more of your adventures! I've talked my wife into going braless a few times, once she got a lot of smiles in a t-shirt at a mall with her nipples poking out.
I also got her nearly naked in the car and masturbating. Someone saw her just as she had an orgasm. I ought to write that one up.