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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Pleasure is in the Details

You've put your finger on it and found the basic need in the characters.

Find time to explore the details. Don't rush. Draw the picture. Explore the moment. Put out the cigarette and let the reader see what isn't on the page, the part that lives in your fantasies. Take your time and let us enjoy what you really see.

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I have written several pornographic / erotic stories, and I'm trying to improve my writing skills. I write stories that I'm interested in, and I try to add humor and personality to the stories. Almost all of my stories are about female domination. A few of my stories are ab...