All Comments on 'Home for Thanksgiving'

about the lack of editing and occasional awkward sentences, but the sincerity of your writing is never in doubt. There is an important message here, and I laud you for having the guts to post something as gritty as this. I was going into a diabetic high from all the saccharine, sugary stories of late, and this one is a refreshing change.

I also have innocent persons killed by drunken drivers.

Boyd

I did her editing, but she doesn't care about the contest really, she only cares that her story gets across and maybe save a life. She would want the contest winner who deserved the winnings to win,. She wins if she can help.

I hope your story helps.

Rumple

I wish I had the courage to write about something as close to me. Best wishes.

...that is all I can say about this story, EW. You should be commended for putting into print something that we should all read and remember. Thanks for putting this contest (and the season) in context for us.

the idea of twelve inch heels for the female character gives the idea the author has never seen a girl in 6 or 8 in ch heels. 12 inch heels makes the story totally unbelieveable without going any further.

How very true. Thank god she wasn't there with them. Someone always seems to blame the innocent no matter what. That she has a husband that can stand beside her and with her will make it easier, but we all miss the friends that didn't make the future with us. If you just GOTTA get smashed, do it at home with the keys locked away. Let the innocents live their lives while you destroy yours alone. The great spirit of the world has a plan we can't change, unless we stop and think and think about how our actions can truly affect others. GP