All Comments on 'History Lessons'

Touching! You feel drawn into the story! Of course, my wife calls me an old softy anyway!

You did a hell of a job. And thanks for the thanks.

Very moving story. I loved teh characters

This is exactly what a romance story is supposed to be like in my humble opinion. Well written and nice characters. Well done. Would like to see a chapter 2 and maybe a 3rd and 4th and so on. I could watch these two grow old together. Nicely done.

Snookman

HLD:

Unlike a previous commentor, I feel it is only fitting this be a romantic story and it be accepted close to Valentine's Day.

A young lady in love with her mentor, a teacher who has allowed life to slip away and surrendered himself to his craft. She realizes what she wants and he has stood by while life passes him by. She is in fact now the teacher of that which makes life worth living; love, and he is the student. How delicious. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Great stuff, one of the best I've read so far!

with good characters and a happy ending. As some other commenter said, if it is to be a romance, it has to have a romantic ending.

HLD, you have a great piece of work here! Tender as well as highly erotic. Best of luck.

I enjoyed the story, and thought it was well written. Good luck in the contest.

a very good love story!

very similar to my own teacher/student fantasy! fabulous job!

Deep Throat have I been so stimulated.

Very sweet. Great characters!

Best of luck in the contest!

After reading this story, I feel like I made a bad career move. Great job.. really got into the fantacy.

"I want to make 'us' work. I don't know how things will go, but as long as we want to be together, we'll find a way."

This was the second story that I read again and again. The first one was The Adventure of Me and Martha Jane. One of the best romance I ever read.

Thank you for writing such a wonderfully romantic piece and share it.

To paraphrase Darth Vader "Daniellekitten has taught you well HLD." Please continue to give us the romance with which you are so obviously accomplished (great stories, characters that you empathise with and best of all, happy endings) and not stray to the dark side (wham bam thankyou mam and kiss my ass goodbye). May the Romantic Force be with you.

I taught high school lit for three years. I too had an "Angelina". I fought my attraction for a student as well. She had me pegged though. Smart as a whip, and just so damn gorgeous. I made the mistake of starting a relationship with her right after her graduation. We should have left town. Her folks found out and the next thing I knew I was an ex-teacher. Worse yet...she was pregnant. Though she fought, her folks yanked her to some un-wed mothers home where, out of rage and grief, she mis-carried. Something I didn't find out until 10 years later. Yeah...we never did get together. She married some rich kid and lives in a big house with the kids she managed to have with him. It's been twenty years since I last saw her. I'll never forget her. That is why I like this site. Nothing but "happy" endings...

which i enjoyed - if any thing the sex scene was over long and dragged on a bit - which rather dominated the rest of the story.

So beutiful! second time reading was even better!!

That was one of the most beautiful stories I've read here so far. It was written beautifully and had a lovely premise. Very well done. Please, keep up the wonderful work!

Thank you :)....

I really enjoyed this story. From the first page I was totally engulfed into the plot.

cute story! glad the girl's dream came true. muy caliente y muy bien! keep writing!

One of the best I've read in quite some time. Keep up the good work.

I liked the "lessons" that they taught each other; which is hopefully what all couples would want & strive for.

This is the kind of love that I wish for; simple & honest.

I was a disappointed during their first time though; it was unclear whether or not she orgasmed. (( My cock started to pulse inside Angelina. Her body tensed along with mine. We kissed harder as my orgasm overpowered me )). It appears that she was on the precipice, but he left her hanging! So unfair; especially when it has been her dream for so long. He should've made absolutely sure.

Added to my All-Time Favs

DKP

HLD, thanks for highlighting my country's hottest export! Belizean girls are the sweetest and best in the world! Loved the story!

Thank you once again!

A very good love story I really enjoyed reading it again.

Ron

Not the first time to read it. In my favorites. Not a lot to say except excellent love story. I think that it had a abrupt ending to it and I thing there was more to write. You pulled me in than you put the brakes on a boom it was finished.

I do think there should be a sequil. If you have already written one what is it called. In my favorites 5 stars plus.

Ron. Texas

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All's well that ends well now what happens next do you have another story plan about to tell them how do they tell her folks when do they get married ect,. I really like the story really good about true love

Ron

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Great love story very well done. Thank you

Really enjoyed the story now my question is when do we get to read the sequel to this story. Two people so much in love.

@HLD Definitely this story would give a double ego boost to a small village nobody and fits to the fantasies of every loner ever. And quite narration too. Loved it.

THAT WAS HOT!! I have not read another story as that one is passionate! PRODUCE MORE LIKE THAT! WRITE A 2nd. chapter onto this one; continue from where they moved into the house with him carrying her over the threshold!

What a super, heartwarming, sexy story! It was a joy to read. Thank you for such a lovely experience.

Beautifully written, great story, convincing dialogue. Flawless, really.

Sweet...!

Quitting and getting them a house-REAL sweet

Tho breaking her hymen-really?

...even if gymnastics/cheerleading/ horseback riding didn't get it I expect VERY few co-eds don't have a dildo, if not sharing a strap-on with her roomie

Just great story and story telling. MM

Loved the story but felt it was missing a page to make it complete