All Comments on 'Halloween - The Taker'

Scary and erotic -- quite a combination! Fantastic writing. Every detail just perfect

Well this is certainly unique. I like how the situations build up steadily...you only get a little detail from the first *take*, but things get very explicit by the last one. I was hoping that the author would eventually go into more detail concering what excatly happens when the main charater *takes* someone, though. Oh well, still definitely recommended!

all those who have said 'I'll wait for you until hell freezes',the waitings nearly over!

I think the initial undressing/sexual tension might have been prolonged to good affect. Nice effort and good luck in the contest!

I was ready for more from this story. It was too short!

Very enjoyable though. I will definitely check out the rest of your stuff!

Would you mind continuing this as a series?