All Comments on 'Halloween Dare Ch. 04'

I have been following this storyline along from Ch.01 ,this story has been getting better with each successive chapter, I hope to read more before the season is over.

are a romantic at heart and a beautiful writer. Keep up the good work anf great luck on the contest. You have my vote.

Danielle

I thought the 3rd chapter was kinda sucky, but you redeemed yourself (in my eyes, of course) with this one. Good luck with your next stories, n2

You had me until chapter four. WHAT THE?!?! I suppose this was meant for readers that are into incest.

Well written and creative but not ghosts just 2 disembodied spirits that somehow never made their final journey. But you got to tell us what was happening 2 weeks later with your characters.

more about dave and jennie please

What happens when they wake-up and/or do they wake-up ?

can we have a update on dave and jennie