All Comments on 'Halloween Dare Ch. 03'

again N2. I love the twist of the story. Good luck with the contest

It was a great story! The twist was wonderful and it has me wanting to read more. I DARE YOU to write more!

Great story, very hot. I particularly liked the fact that there was some development of the characters as they got to know each other a bit; it made the sex more believable. Please make a point of choosing one verb tense (past or present) and sticking with it-- I kept getting distracted the variation.