by oggbashan
Absolutely outstanding. I have to regret to tell you that I have given you a 5bomb. The story was just too clever and witty to do otherwise.
And about your hat in your AV...I am extremely jealous of it...
Brian
Og, lovely story! Even though it doesn't feature actual sex, the passion that you've conveyed in the "Kiss Heard Round the World" was more than enough to stir my heart. Good luck.
This is a very clever and well written short story. It starts with an everyday occurrence and culminates with pent-up passion being shared.
Thank you
An excellent piece. You should be proud.
Very best of luck in the contest!!!
She was a sly little fox, wasn't she? Loved this! Witty, sweet, perfect for the holiday. And for the record, golf is overrated :)
You managed to surprise me with this one Og. It was very un-Og-like. I had to remind myself that I was reading you.
A very straightforward, simple little story. I loved, absolutely loved the way it ended. Explicit sex would have spoiled it all.
Sandra was such a clever one. You have to love it when women manage to get what they want, exactly the way they want it.
A nice short 'love story'.
No one belittled or degraded, as we have learned to expect from OG, and that's remarkable for Literotica stories.
Thanks again for a delightful read.
The theme might be un-oggish, but it is a clear, straight, well written and happy story!
Good for both you and us!
John
sweet story, lacking in explicit sex but not needing it. I'm not a golfer, never having played it, but I would be willing to learn if all the games ended up like this one.
If he didn't want to play golf, he should at least learn more about the game to be a good caddy. After all, he's been claimed! Good story. Thanks
Pretty obviously Sandra was looking for an excuse and grabbed her chance. No wasted words in this one. Not inevitable but believable. Very, very nice. Thanks once again.