All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 09'

what you are writing is some of the best stuff i have read on this site. i hope you keep writing on this story. i really can't wait to see how this ends i am sure it will be good. keep up the good work i am now a fan of yours!!!!

Another excellent piece. It took a while to get it, but it was worth the wait. Please continue this. It is one of the best written stories on here or anywhere for that matter. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I've been away for a while, came back and was tickled to see you came up with another chapter.

Thanks for keeping the story going. I like the idea that our hero is trying his best to do the "right" thing even though the temptation has to be at the extreme.

Keep em coming!!

This is honestly an extremly well writen story. I would just love if you could write a whole novel with this story and somehow get it published because you are an unbelievably amazing writer, and I would definitely buy any book you wrote.

I can say with no hesitation that this storyline is one of the best I have read here on Literotica. The subject, execution of the story, and conflict of the characters is wonderful. I look forward to any continuing chapters from this story.

Okay, so I had about given up on any additional chapters, but it was well worth the wait. I can only hope the next installment is as well thought out and executed as the previous nine. Yeah, I like a bit of philosophy with my porn and vice versa. (Also nice to read that things I do when giving a blow job are, ahem, well received.)

Thank you. Well done.

hey an erotic story with a storyline that didn't put me to sleep...good job

Another great chapter to a great unfolding story, myself and friends agree this is the best on the sight and best we have seen in along time. Keep them coming we will all be waiting!

I had pretty much given up on seeing another chapter aswell. But the wait was definetly worth it. Keep them coming. :)

i have never liked any erotica, ever.

but on the recomondation of a friend. This has been one of the most sensual, and rewarding stories. Keep up the excelnt work. And Please pursue getting published. With all the shit getting written out there, they could use something of quality.

You've compleatly changed my mind. and I cannot wait for the next instalment.

you really cant stop reading it and whant to know when the next chap is comming out

This story is absolutely fantastic. Lots of depth and plenty of sex. There are so many things that I'm dying to know! Bring on the rest of the story!

this story is by far the best.. and they way you wrote the 'in head' talking was awsome keep it coming man

AbbeFaria, I agree with several other critics. You are an amazing writer. This story would be fantastic even without the sex scenes. Keep it coming. I will read every chapter that you write of it.

Ok were is the rest? I want more!

You really are an brillent writer. Some of your ideas are amazing. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a story that you can't stop reading. It somehow blends erotica and fantasy in a clever way that doesn't allow each of the genres to overpower the other. Although some might disagree, this is exactly the way porn films would be more interesting; if the writer/directors took the time to build in a real story with real acting and a compelling thread that built in a sexual angle that complemented the story rather than "be" the story. Excellent work. I hope you are able to continue the story and share it with us. All the best and keep it up!

Great work. Looking forward to the next chapter. Best on the site I have seen.

great story! came for the sex and got hooked buy the plot I hope more will be forthcoming

This is a great story, and I really hope you haven't given up on this plotline. I'm really eager to find out what happens next!!

AbbeFaria, I have only just come across your submissions and I have to say that this is without doubt the most absorbing, imaginative and exciting story I have ever read on Literotica! I think you are a very gifted writer and I will follow you with great interest from now on. You have just made another loyal and devoted fan and I can’t wait for your next and future submissions. Please keep writing you have a rare talent! Sarah xxx

The story is real good. Shold put in more and you get a novel..go on more of it

Best Story i have ever read, not just on literotica, but ever. This story was amazine

Really good stuff, even the stuff that isn't sex! I love the tone in general.

Keep going, please!

Your attention to the details of the story is magnificent. One of the best short stories I have ever read!

I loved the story-- I should have been asleep hours ago but I could not stop reading! More, more!

i emailed the author and this is what he had to say about the delay in the story.

Here's what happened: About the same time I posted

ch.9, I started a relationship. For reasons unknown,

it pretty much killed my ability to write. I started

and stopped intermittently over the last several

months, and I do have about 30 pages of ch.10 to show

for it, but it hasn't been finished. I'm no longer in

a relationship, but I have just relocated to South

Korea. I'm hoping this fixes the problem, I really

want to get it finished. First thing I have to do is

by a better chair though. The one I have makes ones

ass numb after about an hour. I buy the chair,

probably in two weeks. I've started a new job and have

to wait to get paid to spend that sort of cash. It's

coming, I just don't know when.

-S-

i think not only is this a great story but you need to make this a book i could read 200 more pages of this story very well written my hats off to you ty rod

hotrod910_99@yahoo.com

not something one comes across every day. this is deffinately a story you'll have to finish, if it were in book form I'd have a copy in a hardback. Awesome writing. You need an editor to polish this wonderful story into the gem it truely is.

Only thing bad about this story is that there isnt more, so please keep em coming

o my god thiis should be a book i would buy it

better yet lets make it a book

if the author reads this e-mail me at george7red@gmail.com

i'll put u in touch with a publisher friend i have

Please write more!

this is an amazing story, i have only read the first 4chapters (one chapet at a time, copy paste into word) it is exelent! i have now copyed it all into word to read in next few days and just WOW, in the first chapter there was NO sex, hardly any talk of it even, thats a first for this site i think, AMAZING!!! and i love the greek mithology, i kno most of the gods, i will take a wild guess that Afredites (God of beuty) will come in soon

Mate, this stuff is awesome, its got it all, plot and narrative and hot erotic role play. Dude you've gotta right more, it should be an epic mate!

I think the term is "Page Turner"? A story that you just can't put down. That is what this was. I read the whole 9 chapters in less than 24 hours. It felt like an escape from reality.

By far the best I've read in a long time. More P L E A S E !

Incredible. Please keep writing!

Beautiful story. By the way, you must be a really good lover, seems you know how true seduction works...none of this 'and his 20 inch dick was pounding into her for three hours' crap.

I loved your Douglas Adams reference about flying. If only real life were as awsomely crazy as the way that guy wrote.

Thanks for the to time you've taken to develop this story so fully!

So well written,very captivating, and fleshed out! I'm very excited that there is SO Much potential for a whole universe of gods and sex Hahaha hahaha!

Great writing!!!

Please keep it up!