All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles Ch. 24'

Funniest...comment...in...ages!! Great story, as per usual!

I've really enjoyed the story and I appreciate the amount of effort that has gone into writing this much quality material. The characters are well developed and believable and the stories are well written and interesting.

Thanks!

RedJohnny

I have been reading this since chapter 1. Both chapter 23 and 24 were very hot. If you write more like those, no one will complain about "dry techspeak" ever again, Joe.

Having read your story since zero, i have become allmost addicted.Your stories are the first thing i look up.

I do like your people and their conciderations (taking care ) for each other. Imagining having the power they have and using it in that good manner just is a thrill.

Keep up the good spirit.

With love from Denmark. "Isnobad"

keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.

Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

I've been reading this series since Ch. 00 and it's the only series on Literotica I've had the patience to read all the way through. Awesome character development, very believable scenarios, and you somehow are able to make the surreal seem real. Very good quality stuff, you better continue this series, cuz there's not much else on Literotica that's as good.

I hope there's more to come.

It's been over two weeks since the last one. <whimper> <snivel> Is chapter 25 in the offing?

Joe... keep the stories coming please...

i only have one thing to say...

I WANT A JENNIFER OF MY OWN

These stories are the best Literotica has to offer (that I have found so far). Although there may be an individual story that is as good as yours NO-ONE is able to deliver the quality time after time. Your characters have developed well and are people that I would like to meet. My only criticism is: Where is Chapter 25? I need it. Please learn to write even faster :)

Joe, where have you gone? I hope you are well, and in my own greedy way look forward to you continuing this story.

SM

I wonder why you didnt write no more... do you hate me Joe? sob sob... what have I done???....

neways... I m still waiting for the continuation of your story... I ve read the whole series twice... I ve even started to read the user comments... dude.. cmon... work your magic...

Hi I am getting withdrawl symptons after 3 weeks without the Genie Chronicles, its a great story.

...writing available on Literotica! The plot and character development are just complicated enough to make a first class story. I can only echo all the good things already said about the whole series. I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter, a little afraid that Joe Brolly actually has taken his story to a publisher and we'll soon see it as a book. [I'm buying it!]

R U ok, Joe, please don't stop now

Don't stop now!!

Joe,I look forward to each and every gem that you produce please don't stop

Ive read your whole series in one sitting. Loved how you fleshed out the charachters and worked limitations on what can and cannot be done through the power of wishing. I look forward to the continuation of your series. If I have the rules for his wishing right and hes still looking for a cure for AIDS, could he not spread the cure like the disease spread, wishing everyone he has sex with is free from AIDS from then on and everyon the have sex with and that they have sex with...

PLEASE????

We love your series. KEEP GOING, more hot sex and more imagination.

Thanks, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!??????????

I read the whole series in one setting as well. I think it's one of the best series on literotica. The imagination is wonderful, the detail is great, the real life aparts are realistic enough to be refreshing, though not annoying.

Problems are that while the sex scenes were incredible in the first parts, they got shorter and shorter towards the middle and end parts. less descriptive, and unfortunently, less use of the genies powers are seen in the actual sex scenes.

Earlier chapters also had many grammer and spelling mistakes, although that was fixed through the series.

Another thing...you've stopped writing! It would be great if you started back up again. Obviously, you have some fans here, and I would consider myself one now as well. Great story, great plot, great substance, great scenes, great detail.

The Susan stuff is not my type of thing, so i skipped that part over, but good thing on properly segmenting the story with the scene, as so those not liking such things, can easily skip over without loosing too much background information.

I loved, *loved* reading your story. I hope someday you are able to return to it, but I appreciate the time you have given. Extremely fun story.

This whole series doesn't deserve just a "100" rating, it really should get "120" or even "140"! The plot, the characters, the whole concept--all are terrific.

We need more...but Joe Brolly seems to have just disappeared, just plain vanished! What can we do to find him?

Second the Motion!

More needed, it can't just end there!

You must continue your great work. This series is an absolute delight to read.

Please continue the story! I love it so much, and would DEARLY love for more to read. I check every day for more, and cannot wait for the next.

Where are you, sir Brolly?

I have yet to read a story so long or so wonderful. To be able to keep the interest, characters, and plot alive so well for so long is amazing. I too hope you will someday revisit this beautiful series, but if not I sincerely thank you for the entertainment it brought me and... obviously many many other fans. :)

I've finally finish reading all the chapters and I gotta say that I do really wish there are more chapters coming up, but it seems like there isn't. *sad* This chapter doesn't looks like an ending to me, seriously wish more chapters coming up...

Great story. Great Characters. Everything is fantastic. I have kept looking for more chapters since the last one was posted but nothing. PLEASE write more.

Please please make more chapters these are very excellent. Great story ,variety, character, plots fantastic hope to see more...

upsetting even, that the story abruptly ends here, with just a dull "thud"!

I was reading this series as you were originally posting it (I read the first chapter the day you posted it). Then, you suddenly stopped. I periodically come back to see if you have picked it up again. It's been almost a year since the last chapter was posted. Please give us more!

please can we have some more of this story, it's been to long coming

I cannot wait to see the 25th part of this story. Don't keep us waiting much longer!

if he can be gotten a hold of and give his ok someone up to the task should take up this story, its a terrible waste of an absolute dream scenario and its a shame to let it lie here with so many places it could go. anybody know how to find him and get a green light to continue this?

I've just found the next chapter. Chapter 25 is on the way... Yayyyy!

I love the series, but the hermaphrodite thing really turned me off. I skipped those sections...different strokes for different folks eh?

ya i gotta agree with the other commenter about the hermaphrodite... it was a turn off for me too. The only thing I would suggest in the future is to make sure telling your readers at the beginning of the series about it.

Susan may not be my cup o tea but I wouldn't call it a turn off. it's quite original to be honest, I've not run in to stories with a hermaphrodite before. Met some though and they don't tend to be pretty. and they are sterile too. but that is the good thing about stories. everything is possible even a blowjob machine which is terribly convoluted and user unfriendly and still becomes a success.