All Comments on 'Generosity Returned'

Your story made me smile, romance always does that to me. Every word seemed so real, the emotions were perfect. Thanks for starting my morning off right. I loved it! Good luck!

with a good balance of hot sex to the other story elements. Good luck!

I've just re-read this story. I should have commented when I first read it. I would hope that that there is more of the story to come.

J.

loved it! one teensy weesy issue - her eyes change color! In the beginning they're blue, later they're green. Otherwise, lovely!

Hmmm, eyes went from green to blue...just like that!

maybe it's my romantic imagination, but would really like to see more on the future of this lovely couple. Good writing, enjoyable story that could actually happen. Bagpipes and menagerie of pets interesting addition! Thanks :)

Generous, sensitive and far more erotic than many a more raunchy tale

A great first story for Lit.

Thank you for sharing your stories with us.

Brujay

Great short Christmas story. 5 stars