All Comments on 'Freedom Bound'

Funny and hot, the climax made me laugh. Now there's timing for you. Talk about artistic realism, angels crying out in rapture! I was a little confused by the whole Zach/husband issue. It would've been less distracting if I could've just focused on her with Zach without being distracted by the husband being around.

Very well done story. You take the reader through the pain, disgust, frustration, subjegation and excitement for an enjoyable ride. Thanks you

A most interesting story and well done!

hopefully enough to win....good luck!

Oh, my goodness....the climax was positively hysterical!

Good story...good luck in the contest!

~Honey

Good characters, nice build up. Dug the conflict as she tried to keep her cool.

if there is such a thing as a sex angel, i believe it's name would be Entitled.

excellent job...very well done. please don't make me hunt you down to write the sequel.

~v

... naughty naughty Angel. Then again.... that's what happens when angels dance too close to the light.... they tend to get burned by the fire.

*smiles, wink*

Always, Lizzy

*Laughing* Danged if that doesn't make me want to attend a service this Sunday. Excellent story! *Running off to debauch the wife* "Hey honey! C'mere a sec!"

A very funny, and very hot piece of work.

With just enough other emotions to make it a very tasty treat indeed.

Well done!

Good job, ent! ~Imp

You made this witch wanna be an angel! ;)

Wonderful story - best of luck with the contest, and I can't wait to read what happens next.

This was well-written and nicely plotted, what fantastic tension building! It was just plain hot in spots, funny in others, great characterization. I loved the "mini-mall" church comment. Truly well done. Good luck!

I really enjoyed this piece of work. I know you're busy, but I wish you could write more, it's a pleasure to read your work as always. The vision of the Angel sat on the roof struggling not to orgasm is hilarious. This was one angel who really did cry out in rapture and I felt happy for her.

I hope your story does well.

Chris

LOL That was too funny. I enjoyed your story very much, but I could have done without the husband.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

Very well done indeed. A well told story. I could just see her on top of the manger crying out in pleasure. Bravo!

& humming hymns ; )

A real pleasure to read, best of luck!!

A little something different with a surprise ending. Good luck in the contest.

Rumple

The feeling of tension and suspense as she struggled to hold sensation in. I loved it. Devilish little device he used too. WHo knew she was so passionate about her role.

creative and naughty...I love it.

great story ... I could see her there, trying to remain composed as she came and came ... hehe .. naughty

I love stories that mix submission, subterfuge and public spectacle all together.

Great job!

Sexy and funny story. Love your style, babe.

So naughty!!! (I liked it) :)

Very good story. Can't wait to read the sequel... (there IS a sequel right?)

Very wicked and erotic, Ent. Brava!

Wonderful story and a great read Ent, sex and humor works for me any time of the year.

Abs.

Very interesting and well written. Good luck in the contest.

What more is there to say? :)

And funny. Can I get an "Amen?"

I can see her perched there in her dilemma..

a very hot story. I could just see you, sitting above the manger, cumming and cumming while everybody who saw you thought it was some kind of religious fervor.