All Comments on 'Forget Romance'

I love stories like this that deliver exactly what they advertise. No frills, just sex. And what sex!

A very real story and an incredibly hot contest entry!

The dildo was your gift to yourself, and this story was your gift to us! Delicious! Thank you.

I really enjoyed this!

Great job! You're vivid descriptions certainly raised my er excitement--

What a great story and so very well written. It was written in a matter of fact style that served to make it oh so believable.

*nods* Understand completely. Nice job. ~Imp

I liked the undercurrent of regret running through the story hinting that your present, good though it was, was a substitute for a real relationship.

the best love when done right. A person who knows what she wants can give herself the best Valentine's day present ever. Great job.

Oh it's not, oh, well, anyway moving on. Loved your story, I thought it was well written, erotic with a tinge of sadness to it.

Brian

Know it, been there, it resonates for so many who don't send cards or get roses.

Just what this contest needs, a bit of angst and so well written.

I really hope you do well girl. Unlike most, you write from the soul.

Love

Elle

the kind of story that gets straight to the heart of things. Very descriptive and detailed, just the way I like it. Good luck in the contest.

Sounds like the ingrediants for more than just your great story.

Rumple

Hi SophieJane,

I hope you win the contest.

This is a well written story.

Another fine story by SJ.

great story I was really able to imagine it and visualize it.

...make it very easy to visualize the action in this piece.Love the images and the "private glimpse" tone.

..I could see this happening from your words...very hot, babe...loved it!

WOW!

Almost like watching it in my mind's eye, so intimate and personal and yet so sexy too.

Great job SJ

excellent story, SJ!! very realistic imagery

I've signed you up for the battery of the month club. :-)

Great story SJ. Good imagery.

Another great story.. kept me on the edge of my seat... or something like that.

SJ, I liked your story very much. Kudos to you for making it clear that Valentine's isn't always about couples (or flowers, or candy), and that it's possible to celebrate even if one isn't with a partner. Extremely hot stuff, and good luck to you.

I need a cold shower now.

sending... good luck and thank you for the literary journey. <grin

great details and boiling hot!!

story, SJ. I liked the way you managed to create an undercurrent about regret for not having the real thing, the need to be filled. Very nice.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

HOT HOT HOT

(needed a bigger thermometre for this one)

Good luck!!

I wish it (the story) were L-o-n-g-er. Very hard and well-written, though!

I think I'm gonna be living this story on the 14th

Still the greatest love of all.

Hope your Valentine's wish comes true, though.

That wasnt just hot.... That's plutonium melting hot!

That was fantastic! Very Sexy - I was on the verge of orgasm here at work discretely touching. Now i'm madly rushing home to copy cat you.

I am here at work. I have discretely (I think) rubbed my panty covered pussy until my panties are gooey wet. I am headed to the bathroom to remove my soiled panties and finish myself off. Damn, I hope my coworkers don't smell me. So damn HOT Sophia!

I love your descriptive telling of pleasuring yourself. I'd love to watch and then give you what you would really like, you made me so horny. Lance