by ladyblaze
when i stop crying i'll comment...my goodness that was lovely...just totally the most touching thing i've seen,read in a long time. keep it up. respectfully
blaze, you hit a raw nerve with me as i read this...i had the feeling of where it was going....awesome.....i was blown away by your story. keep up the good work. Rhody/wench
You spoiled my enjoyment of the rest of the stories that I read today.
Omg.... *wipes the tears* SOO good hon! amazing.... made my heart break.... so loving, yet so sad *huggs* *snowy*
outstandingly writen. It pulls at things that we all deal with in life. twas a pleasure to read. It remindes me of My own past. W/we must never forget who we are and where we come from. The people that come into our lives leave an impression that we always will remember.-Valec
This is by far the best writing I have seen in a long time. As the others have said before me, when i stop crying, I will reflect on your wonderful story! Thank you so much for the wonderful prose!
As rule I do not cry, but for this story I made an exception.
I haven't been able to stop crying for an hour now every time I look up to my computer I see this and it just pushes me to cry more every time...
A great five star story. I pride myself on being perceptive, but it took until nearly the end before I realized what the story was truly about. I for one am big on the whole sound of the voice, and it is a two way street. Silence is torturous for both parties, but when the silence is forever it adds a new dimension. The reader can feel the pain and frustration of both halves. My only regret is that there is no place for a sixth star. I look forward to reading more from you.
-Master Vyle
I have commanded my pet to live 1 day longer than I do.
Pet you earn your collar daily. Of course I will protect and care for my sugar until we can play again.