All Comments on 'Forbidden Desires'

Such a great story! They have to continue this eploration.

Loved the way this was written, could picture it really well. Certainly hit the spot! Thanks

One word: WOW! Loved the way it was written, easy to visualize and no spelling errors! I sincerely hope this in the first chapter and look forward to more adventures with Peter the Porn Star! Don't let Jewel catch you for a while! Maybe when she does, she needs to sit back and enjoy the view! I would! 2Hot2Handle421

a jewel of a cocktale.

the hero found a real jewel when long pete popped his cherry

sperming my Victorias secret lingerie

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Oooohhh... that one had my cock hard, and I could just about feel Peter's huge cock as though it were going into me. Very arousing tale. Mmmm.

Getting fucked by Peter North has always been a fantasy of mine and your story was great! I dream about his perfect cock and how good it would be to be on the receiving end of one of his thick shaft. Maybe you could write more of the gay adventures of Peter and this time he could cum on a mans's face or maybe someone could swallow one of his massive loads. That man is a stallion!

This is a fine sex story, a very good depiction of truly bisexual lust, as opposed to love. Horndogs, arise! (But do it with proper English grammar, please. "Lie" and "lay" are not the same word; and "had . . . went" is inexcusable.) Not the weak writing, nor the lame ending, but the depictions of bi sex and male psychology earn a strong rating.

That first time getting fucked is so good. Sure it hurts a little, but then begins to feel great. When it comes to getting fucked, I have to admit that I am a size queen.

I would have loved to be with Peter!