All Comments on 'Feast of Life'

by cymry

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sacksackover 18 years ago
very well written

concise, intense, great description! A winner, good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very

Gory, I love a good halloween story. Nice job, good luck with the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Enjoyed it

Great story did enjoy it an awful lot.

Correct spelling of the holiday is Samhain though the it is pronounced sow en.

AliyahlovinsexAliyahlovinsexover 18 years ago
Good job :)

You tricked me! Here I thought he was going to take her with him and make her his lover forever and then he killed her. So much for a romance lol

I liked it though, your descriptions were absolutely fantastic.

dr_mabeusedr_mabeuseover 18 years ago
Fairies Behaving Badly

A wicked turn of events!

Lovingly and gracefully written, and full of beautiful atmosphere. I was truly sorry it all ended so badly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
great

There should be more! I want more! Who is this creature? Please write a second part. You're a gifted writer. I've enjoyed your stories.

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