by sourdough999
...this was a thoroughly entertaining read. Thanks for the fun story.
has many humorous moments, you might have considered the Humor and Satire category. Vampire stories can be predictable and tedious, this is far better than average.
I really enjoyed this twist on the Vampire genre
With tongue firmly planted in cheek, this Writer has written a very clever and highly enjoyable story. Terrific Write! Great Read!
I enjoyed your story. I imagine it is a bit different from traditional crossdresser fare and definitely from vampire stories! Good luck in the contest.
We surely have a comedy writer here and I love it. The other story by this author is also nothing short of hilarious.
This story illustrates that sex doesn't need to ooze from every sentence to make it a sexy, enjoyable read. Loved the twist and the first person narrative really worked to establish character personality. Good job.
your story made me laugh and i really appreciate that. i always have been a sucker for a good laugh hehehe
Completely different than what I expected, especially involving a vampire. It wasn't erotic per-say, but it was a good story, nonetheless. I liked it a lot.
Funny story, who ever imagined running into a vampire with a heart and sorceresses with a soft spot for crossdressers. Glad that Billie got what she wished for, even having babies. But what was she doing in the park at night again? Big smile that the first baby was named Boris.