by vitesse
Now, how is he going to handle Richard and his wife getting together in the janitor's closet at work two afternoons a week. I wonder if the wife, since she now knows her husband really isn't interested in exclusivity, will be looking for a few more Richards to add to her harem.?
You don't notice the lower class English, but everyone else in the world does. In America it would be redneck writing and Oz would be sheila writing which reads like you are jacking off writing it instead of putting in effort to writing a story which lacks appeal.
You need to work on English, story structure and get an editor.
....some tense-switching and I hope hubby gets his turn, but it is still hot. Well written.
you missed out on the best part,after you fucked your wifes pussy you should have a complete gentelman and licked her platter(PUSSY) clean of both your cums
oooooohhhhhhhh sooooooooooo delish.