All Comments on 'Fancy Dress Time'

by vitesse

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the Troubadorthe Troubadorover 17 years ago
Hubby was asking for it, and got it

Now, how is he going to handle Richard and his wife getting together in the janitor's closet at work two afternoons a week. I wonder if the wife, since she now knows her husband really isn't interested in exclusivity, will be looking for a few more Richards to add to her harem.?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
too lower English

You don't notice the lower class English, but everyone else in the world does. In America it would be redneck writing and Oz would be sheila writing which reads like you are jacking off writing it instead of putting in effort to writing a story which lacks appeal.

You need to work on English, story structure and get an editor.

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 17 years ago
All in good fun...

....some tense-switching and I hope hubby gets his turn, but it is still hot. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
cream pie

you missed out on the best part,after you fucked your wifes pussy you should have a complete gentelman and licked her platter(PUSSY) clean of both your cums

oooooohhhhhhhh sooooooooooo delish.

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

Nothing but cuck and whore, no matter how you dress it up.

26thNC26thNCalmost 3 years ago

Author has been putting out garbage for almost 20 years.

rodryder44rodryder44about 1 year ago

James is afflicted with caudalism, meaning he likes sharing his wife.

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