All Comments on 'Faith'

Although only an idiot would not have seen the Marie thing coming a mile away, still a 5-star feel good effort. Kudos. Just gotta work on that M. Night Shyamalan move, but no worries -- even he can't seem to pull it off too well anymore (largely because everyone now knows it's coming). Thanks for a good story!

A very good tale that I've enjoyed a few times. Thank you s-des, keep the Faith!

somewhere east of Omaha

A very heartwarming love story. The misunderstandings, the hurt and later regret-all happen and are normal in a romance. He should have realized that if you fall for a pole-dancer in a nightclub, you should know what you are getting into. She will be dancing to other men, raunchy dancing because that's her job. He should have accepted that. And she, if she was serious about her guy, she should remembered him and not bent the rules to dance to a crowd or gone overboard with her dancing whatever the money. But hey, it was Christmas, the time of goodwill and cheer. Just the right time for all misunderstanding to dissolve and lovebirds to get together. 👩‍❤️‍💋‍👨 💘❤️❤️💋💋💋

Reading the first sentence I thought it was a tale I've spent years trying to find. While it wasn't it still wasn't a disappointment. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ what a beautiful story.

Great story. Very heartwarming. Tyler and Faith were good people and managed to overcome their issues and insecurities. They deserve happiness and I hope the real Faith finds hers. BardnotBard

The slut Faith is angry at how he treated her as she told asshole Ray. She was a fucking whore and acted like one too. Stupid guy had to apologize to the whore and get back with her

Once a whore always a whore. The old bitch Ray would definitely welcome even the slut Faith who would do anything for money!! She would have fucked Paul for 300!! Ray was an interfering asshole

This is a really good story. It speaks of the importance of trust and honest communication. I particularly liked the introduction of the old woman giving out advice. Well done and thanks for a great read.

A moving story about faith and trust. Also a tragedy of errors.

Tyler should not have listened to his father. His telling him what she does for living, didn’t help.

I think things would have been a little smoother if Faith had not gone as far she did. If all she could say to make things okay was it was for the money, makes her more like what she says she isn’t. Then the fight. Still two wrongs don’t make it right.

There was a lot of play with morality and feelings for one another. Also a lot of denial of what they did really feel about each other.

I knew Tyler’s mother had to make an appearance. I was not disappointed by the spirit.

Great story got 5 stars.

Great story. Especially now at Christmas!!

Thank you for sharing!!

I can only imagine how challenging it would be for someone to be in relationship with someone like Faith. Similarly, I can only imagine how challenging it would be for someone like Faith to find a “nice guy”:who can get past her sexy, beautiful, and exotic “exterior act” and cherish the beautiful person she has inside.

Thanks for a wonderful story.

Ray should have taken her, he would get a second Faith second time round

Tyler's father can go fuck himself or go to Johhnys and fuck the bitch Faith! Asshole believes the prostitute rather than his son!!

The old bitch Faith died and hooked her son up with her namesake prostitute

Just wonderful!

She should tell them about the woman.

….always a sucker for these stories…5 stars

Beautiful story!

Whose the bitter xhristianj, what a sad git they are. How sad to live a life like that. Me I loved the story, lots of love and a good twist at the end. I actually think it should have had an epilogue, with them marrying and living happily ever after.

Enjoyed the story, thought it was slightly left of centre until I started to read some of the comments and came across Mr, Mrs, Miss or whatever xhristianj (think it was supposed to read christianj), for pity's sake, it's a story, fiction, a figment of the writers imagination, not some scientific dribble. Chill out, take a pill relax and go read the Encyclopedia Britannica

Dang. I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff. Confusing. Best to quit reading it, or best to not? 5.

Nice twist at the end. Enjoyable story.

Ungh how is this romantic the lonely guy is nothing short of a fucking STALKER. And the chick is a Stripper and according to the story one step away from being a Whore. Like seriously WTF 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Another terrific story. Thanks -Lenny

Anonymous 4 days ago

Could have,should have,would have.The line between relationship advice and romantic fiction seems very blurred in your mind.It is what it is.A mushy.feel good story where the prince gets the princess with the help of the good fairy and they all live happily ever after.Did I mention the Christmas aspect.

Oh! I forgot.5 stars and 2 thumbs up.

Nice story. Too bad it required the ghost of his dead mom to get Faith to take a step back towards reconciliation. Yes he didn't talk to her or trust her but what boyfriend would not have gotten mad when seeing what she did regardless of the job. He said some mean stuff to her but she didn't handle it well. Thr father didn't help matters. Instead of being a go between, he refused to listen to thr son and sulked. Wtf? Then after a month, he learns she has completely cut him out her life. Yet she knows where he lives and could have visited, called, used thr father as a bridge, or sent a letter to his dad's house. No she goes into retail, moves and disappears. And then gives him 5 minutes on her break making clear though unspoken that she is done with him. What? And then she gets the ghost visit. Ummm...

[24.08.22]

Beautiful story about overcoming problems in a relationship.

11/10!!!!!

five stars I Noticed that most of the negative comment's are from anonymous it alwaays seams to be like that every time I read comments I thought it was a nice get back together christmas storty .

People are not perfect. There is always movement in relationships. The good thing is that adjustments can be made to ensure the best comes out.

A nice warm feeling from this story. Compliments to the author on what he has accomplished. Well done!

So after the whore slapped Tye in the parking lot did she go back to Paul and his groupies in the backroom for more touching and grinding.....UNBELIEVABLE THAT THIS CUCK WRITER MAKES TYE OUT TO BE THE BAD PERSON WHEN THE WHORE BROKE THE RULES FOR EXTRA MONEY AND HIS LOSER FATHER SAW HIM AS THE PROBLEM

Ray AH should have taken the whore Faith since he was on her side. The MC DESERVED MUCH BETTER

FAITH WAS A PROSTITUTE....BREAKING THE RULES TO GET MORE MONEY!!

RAY WAS A BASTARD FOR CHOSING THE SKANK FAITH OVER HIS SON!!

ONCE A WHORE ALWAYS A WHORE

Not sure how anyone could hate this, nice story, good moral.

Such an amazing story. I loved it and i believe all the people who hated it need to look closer at the message not the charactor and get over their closed minds. Also it took me an embarrassingly long amount of time to figure out why faith was so upset about the picture of marie lol

The form and organization of this story is perfect. The haters in the comments didn't get the lesson the story started with, and it shows that the missed the point of the whole story. The way the story ended was the author telling us to go back and enjoy the form. Wonderful, simply wonderful.

THANKS

Me,I think Jenny is a fool to go back to the selfish, control freak.

Nice, very nice.

WHY IS TYE APOLOGISING SO MUCH TO THE SLUT WHEN SHE WAS CLEARLY WRONG THAT NIGHT AND HE CAUGHT HER RED HANDED....HARD TO BELIEVE NOTHING WOULD HAVE HAPPENED FOR A COUPLE MORE HUNDRED DOLLARS

WHAT WOULD FAITH HAVE DONE FOR 300$....ONCE A SLUT, ALWAYS A SLUT

A great story and his reaction that night was on point....she was already impressed with 200 dollars that she broker her rules about doing it with a group and letting Paul touch her, even his dick was grinding her good so for 300 dollars she would have went much further in that excitement. I dont see anything wrong with Tye's reaction to the slut's behaviour. She got off easily, I think!

This is my third time reading still fond of the story. Still awarding a five star 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

“she was very hurt and angry about the way he had treated her. Tyler tried to explain what he had seen, but his father wouldn't hear it.” So she gets to betray his trust and act like a whore and he’s supposed to be okay with it? I bet if he didn’t step in she was gonna go to the back room with them and get all her holes filled for a few extra hundred dollars.

This might be the third time I teared up at the Christmas reunion.

A great re-read, 5 years later. Still 5 stars.

A 5 star for sure! I don't have any words to describe this story other than that I love it and would even without the obligitory sex talk. Color me a softy or a well-bruised loser of the male/female wars but damn-it this story hits me hard, thanks for the emotional trip.

A masterpiece on several levels: the subject matter itself and the intrigue, to name but these two.

Was the old lady in the story Marie? I think so. Five stars.

BJ

A nice warm fuzzy feeling story.

Everyone needs a little Faith! Thank you for your story. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

very sweet!

I have read this more than once. The first times I read I enjoyed it and it gave me hope

This is a strange day. Today it made me cry for I have lost faith. Have lost it before but always

got it back. This is the first time it has made me cry.

Momma still watched over her son.

Beautiful story! AC in SC

What a warm and loving tale, the end with the twist of Faith talking to his mom in the park and giving her a nudge to go back to her son was so fitting for a tale told at this time of year. The end seemed to be rushed as it needed to continue on for a little longer showing their happily ever after. Well done 5 stars

REALLY ENJOY GOOD STORIES - THIS ONE IS MORE THAN GOOD! I hope that even though you are not posting here that you are still writing. Be a shame to waste a gift!

somewhere east of Omaha

Another 5* for the author. Like most of the best stories on this site, I wanted more! Like how Faith became a stripper - 90%+ of these women are there for reasons beyond the money and what happened after their reunion. But there is no doubt about this author's ability to make you feel the pain and sorrow of relationships and the ability to get happiness back in their lives from the goodness of others.

Would love to see a continuation of this story. Other than him walking in to find his girlfriend grinding on a customer and his hands all over her this was a fantastic story.

Great story full of love and fantasy..... to the person who threw nothing but hateful words towards the author and his "girlfriend" have you forgotten where he met the young lady? He walked into her life... And WTF ... they are BEARS FANS lol ..... as Cris would say.... "DOUBLE DOINK"

Only simps date strippers,cam girls or hookers, their sluts made for fucking not dating. If your girl has ever voluntarily worked in jobs above, then i guarantee shes cheated on you. The slut in this story had no issues grinding on another man for a few dollars, who knows what wouldve happened if the bitch didnt see Tyler standing there. If shes not at least fucking the club owner this story is unrealistic.

I giving it a 5 star rating because it has everything. Romance, happiness, seasons greeting, sadness and family joy and love. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Hero's reward was the first of your stories I read you have made me a fan ! Sorry I haven't seen anything past 2012 of your stories

I loved it till you had the characters portray bears fans. I knew it was fiction at that point! My 13 times World Champion Green Bay Packers have eaten bear stakes at home and away when destroying the bears for years!! I gave your story 5 stars but you needed the scolding on football history! Go Packers Go Bitches!!!!1

Totally enjoyed this story, very well written ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Beautifully written Christmas romance. Well done

I keep reading your stories and find myself in the places you talk about. I felt your story deeply. I fell twice for warm hearted dancers, one is still a friend som 30 years later.

Faith was a great person doing what she had to do. Her love for Ty makes the difference in her life. We never know how we touch people when we get close enough to make an impression.

This is a touching love story that makes one think.

The park bench scene is well done. It was a necessary touch that was well woven into the fabric of the characters.

Well done!

Well, at least it wasn't the cheating Patriots or the fucking Cowboys, but I would have preferred classic Honolulu Blue and Silver but this wasn't a Thanksgiving story. You get big points for it being the old 'Black and Blue Division - The Monsters Of The Midway."

"...I usually call Triple-A." Unless they've changed the rules they will still come out if a covered passenger calls, it doesn't have to be the driver. Just sit in the car while she tries to start it and you become a passenger. But then the Christmas magic wouldn't have happened.

In a story like this you had to know who the old woman in the park was. Great touch.

The answer is plain to see. Do you care more about his pain, or your own fear?"

it was a big mistake but forgivable. you made them bears fans and had the bears doing the impossible or nearly impossible which is beating the Green Bay (Title Town) Packers. with a little football history under your belt, you might have realized the 13 times World Champion Packers are GOD's and America's team. when your story doesn't reflect this reality you might as well have it categorized under science fiction. you alienate a large portion of the population. just a suggestion you could have had them watching a hockey game between the Blackhawks and some losing Canadian team. like a said forgivable so 5*s but please learn from your mistakes.

I really enjoyed the story, especially the though of our loved ones watching over us.

Two people meet and the attraction is majic to say the least. It's a make you never give up on that special person or persons. It's going into my favorites list for sure. So very touching in so many ways. cowboyridecc@yahoo.com j/Ron

Sweet “Christmas” story.

It’s a Christmas story everybody. That’s why it’s so saccharinely sweet. It ok. It’s the genre. Now, if it wasn’t a Christmas Story, then ugh.

5-stars

..true love, baby! An interesting and attractive story that should inspire any true romantic's love juices to flow freely. I gave it five golden stars.

Dan was right, though. The time would come, the circumstances would conspire against her and she would fall. It was fortunate Tyler arrived at what had to be a crucial moment. How many faithful(till then), wives/girlfriends, thought they were strong enough to resist temptation, put themselves in risky situations and then succumbed, to their everlasting shame. Nice romantic story. 5*s.

One of my favorites on this site. Thank you for an amazing story.

S-Des has a way to telling a sweet love story while including hot sex. It's a great combination. The Characters of Ty and Faith were developed well and their actions fit their characters. The more I read this author the more I enjoy his work.

Anonymous either needs to identify himself or cease with his rants. Like my momma always said: "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all".

Really enjoyed this romantic story about two flawed people finding love with each other. I must note though that I can't imagine a boyfriend being able to tolerate having his girlfriend continue working as a stripper,giving lap dances,for several months.Ty already had a trust issue from his previous relationship and his friends helped stoke the stripper/possible sex/trust issue. Also found them slipping off to the bedroom on Christmas for make-up sex with a 5 other people,including two kids,waiting to open gifts a tad tacky,if not hard to believe. ~ Still,I really enjoyed this tale and gave it a 5.

You take that Godawful Bears Jersey off of her and put on a Vikings Jersey.

Seems to me, Jared Allen's old number, #69 would be fitting???

Wow, after a story like that it made me want to almost go look for Faith lol. But, I am happily married for 23 years and was lucky enough to find "My Faith". She might never have been a Dancer or had the body of a Dancer, but that's not important. She shares the same loving traits as the Faith in this story and THAT'S what's important.

Nice Story

Sci Fy is about as close to sanity as this story...

TAKE her back stupid. Just that she can be bought doesn't mean she might not be exactly faithful 20 years from now. Yas Yas nothing to see here of course you can trust a budding whore skank. have a blind life...

The stripper with a heart of gold, and a spirit guide too! Oh yeah, and Christmas cheer on top of that? What's not to love about it? Keep 'em coming! ;-)

I could see the old woman talking to Faith. Then I could see Faith expression upon find out who the woman in the picture isn't! Wow good detail on your part. Excellent

" but the kicker is... if you meet them while they're a stripper and you are cool with them at that point, you don't get to bitch later"

You said it better than I would have.

On strip clubs, not that I've ever been in one ;), but the high end places are just that. Generally nothing too untoward happens on premises. Of course some girls will meet you elsewhere. Now at the lower end joints, anything is on the table up to and including intercourse.

oh my, what a romantic and realistic story...LOL!!!

A very compelling story with some exceptional dialogue in it's writing. Some of us can relate to these two characters.

I really enjoyed this feel good story, well done, 5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

70 years old and I still enjoy stuffing $ in gstrings and lap dances at full contact clubs. One thing I learned a long time ago. In FL nobody is getting a happy ending. It is not a whore house. Some girls may work extra off hours but not in the club or the parking lot. They will be shut down. My favorite ex stripper is now 67 and still does body rubs with the best hand job ever. Huge tits, long nips, great body and superb dinner date.

with the hole in her life. TK U MLJ LV NV

happened on it once again. I loved the story then, still love it now. Redemption, faith (in oneself) and being smart enough to pick oneself up afterwards, no matter how far you'd fallen, and try again - yeah, that's the right attitude. Especially love Marie, though - she is special.

And glad that Ray is also coming out of his shell.

luv2read2

Yeah, I've known a few dancers. Most are just like most other women once you get to know them except they got dealt a bad hand or made a bad decision, usually regarding a man. I'm sorry that some of you commenters are so unhappy that you want everyone else to be unhappy too. Great story!

I really enjoyed reading this story. You have a way with words!

It is almost 10 years since this story was submitted and I hope the real Faith has found her 'Tyler'

true love in a whore house...NOT!

YOU ARE GOING TO GET IT ON YOU....what would she have done for $1000 or 2000??? Same with married guys, if you allow yourself to be in wrong places eventually bad things can and probably will happen...

I have known a few dancers in my life, and for the most part, most are just in it for the money. I met a great couple of them in Seattle, and was invited to their homes, and was made to feel so comfortable while with them. I didn't "get any", but that is not what this guy wanted in the first place. I just wanted to meet some women that I could talk to. Yeah, I know, I was young, dumb, and loaded (somewhat, with cash) and was a guy from small town USA living in the big city, learning my way around

You really got me. A tear stained 5. Thanks.

Fantastic story! My only complaint is that I wish Faith told Tyler and his dad about her encounter with his mom

I agree with Anonymous - 08/09/15

You should have let the scenario at the strip bar unfold more and then let the story continue from there.

Yes I think the way the way the "Private?" dancing with Paul was going she would have let Paul continue get more and more intimate.

I think that the story should have let the "Private?" dance progress to the point that she was sitting on Paul's lap with her eyes closed, leaning her back against Paul while he was rubbing her pussy outside her thong. Then, with a moan as she realized just what she was letting happen, she would open her eyes to see Tyler standing there watching. She would see the devastated look on his face and the hurt in his eyes before he walked away shaking his head.

Since she wasn't drunk we would find out her true feelings.

Was she a stripper/whore and let Paul continue until he fucked her in front of all the guys, then she'd go to the gang-bang, And all for money.

Or would she come to her senses and stop Paul and stop the dance completely and try to talk/explain to Tyler?

I've know a few strippers in my time and I can tell you that the ones I've known are world-class actresses. Of the ones I've known, none of them get off on the dancing, lap dances, or the occasional touches, though it may seem like that to the guys. They act like that because of the money. Pure and simple. They know that it's an ego trip for the guys, and that the guys will continue to pay them thinking that they're going to get fucked, (but that's NOT going to happen).

I'm sure that there are strippers out there that do fuck the guys, but not in the clubs. First of all they'd be fired on the spot if management found out, and second (more importantly to the club) if if it became known the club wold get shut down.

Yes I think the way the dancing was going she would have let Paul go too far if she hadn't seen Tyler. Maybe even have gone to the gang bang party.

My preference would have been to let the scenario at the strip bar unfold and then deal with it.

1. If she eventually stopped the fondling, see what stage that happened. Let her make her own mind up rather than be forced by seeing Tyler. She wasn't drunk, so he would have a good idea of how much she valued her fidelity.

2. If she did not and Paul went too far with her or she went with the gang afterwards he would know.

Why rely on a leap of faith rather than allowing what was actually going to happen take place, especially as she wasn't drunk. In any event I think dry fucking was too much anyway so really he shouldn't have taken up with her in the first place but then I suppose there would have been no story!

People were right he shouldn't have trusted her. She showed him that. If she did that for 300$ what would she have done for say $1000? Would they have gotten their gang bang? Possibly. What is he apologizing or feeling guilty for he's the wronged individual. There's things she does as a stripper that he was alright with and expected all those things she did were slut behavior not stripper ones. Not to mention what didn't he see this time or others? Did she turn hooker and screw some guy for $500? Wouldn't surprise me.

Great characters, excellent motivations and reactions.

JRT

What an awesome story. I've read dozens of stories on here but his is probably the best. Hopefully the "real" Faith will be as lucky.

Tyler was right to be upset on that last day she worked.

Yes, she worked as a stripper and did lap dances but he was mostly able to deal with that because he really trusted her. It took people saying "don't trust her" often to even give him instances of not.

But that trust was based on he KNEW he could trust her because the club rules made the potentially untrustworthy actions impossible. She would only tease and they couldn't touch - no real risk.

Until he walks in and finds out the rules are FLEXIBLE with enough money on the line... and now he's right not to trust the situation. And she was giving the impression she was on that slippery slope...

MAYBE nothing would have happened... but I'm guessing if a guy came in every day she worked and asked for a dance until she'd earned $200, she wouldn't have let him get away with what she was letting Paul get away with.

I'm not saying she would ever consciously have made the decision to have had sex with Paul but he was well on his way to getting her there by bypassing her mind and going straight to her body.

Glad it worked out for them though. His interruption really WAS enough to get her mind back in control.

And if she really NEVER was going to sleep with the guy, she also still did something she had to KNOW would seriously hurt Tyler.