All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 20'

One has to read this with a certain amount of pride to just be associated with such talented writers. Red, must be congratulated for riding herd on a fine coordinated effort.

For those of us who have enjoyed this story please know we feel a certain amount of regret that the story's ending.

How does that old song go? "The story's over, but the memory lingers on..." Wonderful Read - Wonderful Effort!

It's always good when a bad guy gets his. And I love the romance of this one.

Red,

As always your writing is excellent. Your ending very fitting and proper for the way this story developed. I'm proud to have been a part of this chain story and to be associated with the fine group of writers put together. Its been fun and thoroughly enjoyable.

Thanks for the opportunity.

Jus

Thanks for a great story. Loved it.

Admittedly, I'm part of this chain story, so there might be some bias, but I thoroughly enjoyed it. True, it was light on the sex, but this is more of a romance series than smut. It's not stroke material. It's much more of a serious plot, with a lot of suspense, believable characters, drama, romance, action (including some violence), and a damned good setting. Most of all, the ending was a twist. Yes, I enjoyed this tale and give it a 5.

DC:

You and your fellow authors did a tremendous effort on a truly great tale. Your ending with the bad guy dead and the good guys (and gals) in love and married brought joy to this Horny 'ol Sailor's heart. Thank You All. Ronnie W.

i totally agree with "Horny 'ol Sailor" all i can add is damn it was a good read.

-Girlie

Hey red, what happened to chapters 2,3,5,6,9-17,19? Enjoyed what i've read but wish to read the whole series. Maybe if you still have the stories you could post those as well. Hope to read more!

If you only click the links given in the "bubble" by the story you'll only get the chapters that I wrote. Here is a link to the content chapters of the chain stories found on Lit. http://www.literotica.com/c/chain-stories/2-page -- if you go to the chain stories link, you can find all the chapters written by each author. I'm sending you a private email, with this link as well. :)