by Charles Petersunn
I wonder if this tale might have benefited from being split over two sessions, as seven pages - heavy on the dialogue - is a bit much to absorb at one sitting.
Thought it was great ... tension built nicely, definitely erotic, am curious to see where the next installment goes
I liked it, it is a bit long, but it is a good story. Would love to read the next session.
I agree story is long, but why split it up? I tend to read most stories in parts, putting it down and coming back to it later. I much prefer this over the stories that are split up so heavily that there is very little in some parts. At least this way, if you want to read it all at once, it is readily available for you. This way, you can choose easily how much to read.
Help me Doctor,i am terrified of becoming a MAD WANKER reading such erotic stories,my mother who I have just had it away with and is gasping for breath on the bed says not but i would like a second opinion.Incidently istill have resonable eyesight and have not developed a twitch yet Worried of Clapham
Although it is hard to believe college students would be this inexperienced and naive (you obviously haven't worked with today's college students...some have been "serious" since the age of 12!), I still enjoy the sensuous buildup, underwear stimulation, etc. The blindfold was a stunning idea and worked well. Overall, one of your best stories!
The boys never did get to see "all" of the girls' bods.
If there is a further installment they should reveal their breasts and let the boys penises inter-react with "all" of each girl.Great story. Great build-up and sensual desires
revealed.
Thought this was a great story,liked the use of the word cunnies,could do with more tales like this Nice one.
please continue with dr. lowenstein. i enjoy her one-on-one encounters with her male patients. perhaps a private session with just the boys? she needs to experience their cocks (in her mouth, between her tits, in her ass and cunnie).
you are an awesome writer. I allways look for your stories.
So well written!
Thank you for writing and please write more!
This author is amazing. His stories are incredibly erotic while at the same time making me laugh out loud in several places. I don't care how far fetched they are. They are fun and funny. Please keep them cumming. lol
such naive kids in college and yet, they "accomplish" so much in such little time. That Dr. Lowenstein is truly a miracle worker; it goes to show what exposure to a bit of sex can do to even the most innocent person. And, yet surprisingly, none of the girls lost a bra, exposed a breast, or had the least hesitation about having their first fuck and without any protection including one who wanted it "inside me." I was a fun read that begs for extensions for each of the participants - how will they continue with their new-found maturity and confidence?
I wish you still wrote on this site, your work is amazing!
Though they are merely products of Petersunns sick fantasy, I find I could cheerfully throttle characters such as Dr Lowenstein, Mr Peters and Miss Harding ( but oddly enough, not Ms Bixley). They employ infuriatingly twisted logic under the False Flags of Professionalism and Political Correctness.
Petersunn, you are a Master DISINFORMATIONIST and AGENT PROVOCATEUR. In a way, you are wasted on the Literotica audience. I'm sure the vast majority of them, even your most avid admirers, have no real idea of the SUBVERSIVE nature of what you write.......Or, do they? I'd wager also that you would be (and even ARE, for all we know) the pride n' joy of the Tavistockians and Chatham House - and should be ranked alongside the likes of DEWEY (glorified 'Educationist' of the ''Let's dumb them down'' persuasion), B.F. SKINNER ('Human Behaviourist' and Industrialists dream, TIMOTHY LEARY (psychedelic drugs peddlar & Corrupter of Youth Extraordinaire in the 60's), and ALDOUS HUXLEY of 'Scientific Dictatorship' fame.
On the other hand, you could be harmless or as was said of Planet Earth and Earthlings in THHGTTG......'MOSTLY harmless'. But I have my own doubts about your stories in that regard, even though I admire your writing ability and your talent to spin a good yarn.
I have my doubts about Mr. Doubts. But, I will say that nobody should ever consider any of the therapy processes or scientific references herin to be valid or accepted. That being said, I just had a really good cum from reading this. My wife and I met in a group therapy setting (albeit a very different one) and I now have a wonderful fantasy of my wife and I meeting for a different kind of therapy. Like many men, I experienced pussy for the first time in the back seat of a Chevrolet. Dr. Lowenstin's office (or orfice)would have been a much better experience. Please tell us this group's therapy is ongoing. Or, maybe they continue to meet on their own initiative to explore their socio-sexual interactions and intimacy comfort levels.
The beginning could have been tighter. You could have summarized the initial exercises, hand holding, face touching, etc., instead of walking us thorough them.
This was the first time that I have read where your "wordy" style was so very beneficial. In the group therapy, where this group was so awkward socially and uncomfortable with their own bodies and those of the opposite sex, her every action and instruction really needed to be explained fully. Through her exercises they came to defend one another, depend upon each other, function as a team, and make the final progress to the ultimate comfort level. Each could be relatively comfortable with the nakedness (complete honesty) of the opposite sex and other members of their own sex. Though she did not ask them to touch members of their own sex, she did initiate tactile stimulation of the opposite sex of her/his choice. Climax and intercourse while giving and taking instruction from their partners is the culmination of her therapeutic approach and success. Really like this. The best I've read of yours so far.
Interesting that the good doctor is so hesitant about anal in this story. She certainly has progressed by the time of The Cornhole incident!