All Comments on 'Doll Ball Preparations'

by nilequeen26

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sacksackover 19 years ago
words fail me....

For once I don't know what to say about a story! Certainly the topic is remarkably original, but the whole interaction of the dolls is too short and superficial. This could have been a lot more interesting if the dolls flirted more, or just had a less "vanilla" interaction. Good luck!

navalnavalover 19 years ago
Funny

I liked it. Short and to the point.

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