All Comments on 'Doing the Dishes'

I have to agree with what you said about your grammar but the story was still pretty good.

I have an idea Brenda is going to screw up his marriage eventually.. Maybe someone elses marriage at the same time.. I do believe the woman is right when she says she is a nympho.. And, of course, Bob will be very disappointed, too.

A choice and compromise is frequently needed. Let the husband be the ex, and she, can support herself

Either it is not realistic or else she has a mental problem and reading about mentally disturbed women is not sexy; in fact, it is a huge turn off.

The story shows that she is mentally disturbed since, for example, reformed prositutes are as chase as any woman.

Your word choices read like English isn't your first language. Stilted is an understatement. Read your story out loud to yourself. Do people speak like that? Then people won't want to read that.

What an asshole friend!!!