All Comments on 'Discovery'

You should really continue this story and make it a wonderful love story between a father and daughter.

Will you make a sequel?

Very loving and innocent, as others have already mentioned. Well written, also. I would have liked to have had it go slower, though. The realization and the sex happened too quickly. No foreplay was a disappointment.<br><br>Keep up the great work, though. I look forward to reading more of your work.

hope to read some more from you

A very gentle and loving portrayal of genuine love and affection between a Father and Daughter. I hope to read more of your stories Lord Bob, I do like your writing style.

Gypzie