by logophile
This was no ordinary wank story, dispite what your sig line implies. Very well written.
you made me feel the frustration of your character. No easy feat, that. Great job, Logo!
A nice turn of events... I loved it!
What a set up, I felt cheated. Kind of like the lady, huh? Good work and an interesting turn of events. Good luck!
Logophile, That was a neat read. I liked how you organised it. You made it look easy while I know I wouldn't be able to write a story this way.
And very well written indeed! thanks for the mention -it was my pleasure :)
Logo,
I agree with Doc, that story had about the oddest organization I've ever come across--but it worked. A unique, enjoyable read. Congratulations on a job well done.
Rumple Foreskin :cool:
Well written but strangely shaped. The climax came at the start and it ended in frustration, like a snake with a beautiful head and an ugly tail.
Very well done with very honest emotion. And brilliantly edited too!
...oh, my God, logophile, what a sexy, sad, stimulating, frustrating, romantic story! It was a roller-coaster ride!
Most of all, I love the way it was written, taking us all over your emotional map. Great stuff (as usual!)