All Comments on 'Diana'

Counting up the loose ends will take all night and 3/4 of the story was never told. Why don't you try again with this story, only do it some justice instead of giving it a hackneyed who cares feel.

Tail End Pete

I'll give you a hundred for emotional content but as for storyline? What the f* happened?? Cheers Yoron.

I could see plenty of room to flesh this out should you decide to.

1) Who was Diana.

2) Who was he.

3) What was there about the necklace that had everyone so upset.

4) What was there about his 'belief'.

I realize a lot of good stories like to leave stuff to the reader's imagination, but there are times when that may not be a good thing. It was a good story though.