All Comments on 'Determination'

although the fact that it is not her first time is a major plot point. It feels like a first time, at least in the first two-thirds as the emotion is being built. I really enjoyed the willful restraint he shows and how it fuels his fire when she utters the phrase he has longed to hear. Well done...

i liked it! very good story and great emotion and attention to detail shown!

An extrememlyboring story with poor usage of metaphors.

A really great romantic story.

Aou are a great writer, I love most of your stories