All Comments on 'Demon Flesh'

Matthew watched Nona become one scary lady. Now he's unable to break away from her clutches. They shouldn't have stolen the Codex. Horrifying and intense!

hot. very hot. and dark. sex and pain and bloody ecstasy.... makes me come just thinking about it. mmmmmmm.

This was very dark and intense for a one-pager. I could almost smell the oil used and hear the screams. Great job, and good luck in the contest.

Ooh, just marvelously decadent and erotic!

What a treat!

...to believe that this is your first story on this site since you've produced a classic short erotic horror.

Skillfully done. I would love to turn it around and experience the ordeal from Nora's perspective. Also, what's next? Was the transformation total, or a reoccurring curse? I hope there's more to come with such a rich subject matter. Bravo!

in a short compass. Good luck in the contest, this was a hell of a read!

That was one helluva read! Best of luck in the contest.

omg wow damn keep it up

A very intense piece of work. One that does a wonderful job of blending horror and eroticism.

Well done.

Very hot, very dark, very sexy...

please, nigga.

MILD SAUNTER

what the fuck you think this is, nig? mac n cheese? nawwww.

lillith is a bad ass nigga. real slow like.

ps. mild saunter.

-- love lillith