All Comments on 'Deadly Artefacts'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
teenie tiny.

to short make not a lot of sense

FallingToFlyFallingToFlyover 17 years ago
More of what you are the master of...

Short-short stories that make perfect sense. Good Luck, Ogg.

sacksackover 17 years ago
excellent, Og!!

Although some would argue you "cut" these stories too cruelly down to size!!

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Sharp and Precise

Just like the various weapons featured in your shorts, Og. You've done it again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mog Like Ogg writing.....

Vignettes! History? Maybe. To the point!

Swedeq

LadyCibelleLadyCibelleover 17 years ago
I'm getting repetitive I know...

but no one does it better than you.

You TRULY are the King of the 50 words stories. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Creative and Original

Great craftsmanship is easily recognized here! I loved it!~Good Luck in the contest~

pcsocakepcsocakeover 17 years ago
worth the wait

as always, whenever there's a special holiday contest, i waited for your 50 word stories. this one is worth the wait as well. :) thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Nice work

You had me laughing, this is sicker than my own 50/15 story.

Watch that passive voice though...

damppantiesdamppantiesover 17 years ago
Well done again

A lovely title and a good group of stories. I wait for your 15 word stories in every contest, Og. They're always an easy and fun read. Liked 7 and 9 best. :)

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoover 17 years ago
Bloody Brilliant !

Only such a talented author could tell so succinct a tale in so few words. To do it repeatedly, well, I am properly in awe. :)

MunachiMunachiover 17 years ago
great little stories, as always...

I liked the fact how these ones had a more similar theme and at the same time moved through history... Have no specific favourite one, I liked them all...

Selena_KittSelena_Kittover 17 years ago
My Fix!

Ahhhhh there's my Og-50/15-fix! I feel so much better now... :) Truly enjoyed them all, I can't even pick a favorite this time!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A Flagrant Display of Lethal Artistry!

My goodness, it's a dangerous world!

It takes great skill to write these stories and it takes an artist to write them well. You are both a craftsman and an artist.

I enjoyed these immensely!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 17 years ago
Creepy

and scary and good. I especially like the way you went through history although I think you omitted the PTO of WW2. You also misspelled "Artifact."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
False pretences

Some horror, most definitely. But where's the "erotic" component?

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...

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