- Romance
- Dance of a Kiss
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The world turns to vapor in a swirl of tongue and lips, in the victorious, dance of a kiss. The cycle 'rings' loud. Who's lips will savor the flavor of the next Valentine Day Challenge? Would Rajar's last thought be ..."who?"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 6 years agoPerhaps, this is poetry, but hardly prose. Last time I checked, prose is to have complete sentences.
Rumple Foreskinabout 19 years agoIt's hard for me to comprehend someone voluntarily reading a Romance category Valentine's contest story, then running it down because it reads like a romance. Say what?
Everyone's entitled to their own opinion and it's to the credit of the preson who left the previous PC that they included their name. But the reasoning used defies all logic. "Great writing, Mr. Faulkner. But I don't like southern novels, so I've given your story a 25 and will probably vote accordingly."
Good work, ET.
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Rumple Foreskinabout 19 years agoWhile everyone is entitled to their own opionion, to put-down a story in the Romance category because it reads like a romance, a genre "aloneil" admits to not caring for, would seem to defy all laws of logic and common sense.
"Gee whiz, Mr. Shakespeare, I don't like all that lovey-dovey stuff and the underage sex and those teenagers getting killed. That stuff's just gross. Your play is well-written, but I'll have to give "Romeo and Juliet" a rating of 25 and maybe a one-bomb."
Give me a break. Hang in the ET.
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Venus_in_Fursabout 19 years agowith everyone else. There's a reason I don't read romance novels (cause they suck) and this writing, while technically proficient, is reminiscent of that style of writing.
